All Comments on 'Mom Inspects Me'

Hope u got some more on the way

This has potential, keep on writing

Very good start hope you finish it.

Very suspenseful, love the tension between them.

I liked it is there a second chapter

I liked that you didn't rush off the bat. I really like dominant moms. Hope you will continue to develop what has already happened. The story is promising.

Good start.

Looking to forward to the next part!

Too short

I so want more .... can't wait

Good start.