All Comments on 'Mom is a Mess'

Nicely done, I thoroughly enjoyed your tale of lust and Mexican food. Not overly burdened with back story it ripped right along, well paced, well written. Well, I'm just going to have to read it again.

It was like winning the Lottery, just with nachos.... Had a good laugh, and a happy ending to go with it. Enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing it with us.

The feels in this story man. I blame my allergies for my wet eyes. But thank you for the amazing read.

You had me from the first page. Great read, the story flow’ed without a lot of excessive byline or background. Keep up the good work, looking forward to your next publication.

This Story had a Great Line all the way .. And the End was Just Great keep up the great work .

Nice to read a double happy ending. The making love was exceptionally tender.

This was a damn good read! I can't wait for more of Alex though!

It’s not that often that a story has such a powerful effect on me. Like another commentor mentioned, those damned onions appear at the most inconvenient times. They make the reader all weepy for some odd resson.

If my comment makes little sense, I blame that on the onions.

He tells it as he sees it, and as it happens. We get so far into his experience and perspective that the story is like sitting there hearing it in person.

My aunt was in the restaurant business.

There's no way a career waitress comes to work in high heels.

She'd have blisters the size of pancakes.

And if she ain't real, then this whole thing ain't real

Thank you all for your kind words! I am glad the humor and emotion both came through. I laughed and cut onions while writing it so it makes me happy that you felt the same.

Re: Damn - Chapter 19 is coming Tues/Wed and 20 is gun b gud. Probably next weekend.

Re: Vin Diesel - I hate to break it to you, but she ain't real. If it's a choice of footwear that breaks your immersion then I am sorry for you and can't help but wonder why you're here.

Its from xXx, the movie.

I made a joke of a reference which wasn't caught. Its okay. I still very much liked the story, cheese dick.

Yeah, big woosh on that one. Haven't seen it. Sorry and thanks. I'm a dumbass.

A very good story. I liked it and where this could go. I hope you will write more to it. I will read your other story and look forward to more stories from you. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Beautiful!! Ten stars, if I could!

Made me laugh, made me cry , made me horn..........

......well let's not go there. Great story!

Enjoyed the way you wrote this...thanks!!!!

I really enjoyed this story, so well written. it might be just a story, but I cried at the end.

Thank you

One of the best I've read in months. I liked the intensity, the humor and the love between mom and son. I wish I could give you ten stars.

Full of sad hope and good writing.

There is a really touching, lovely and poignant little story.

I know this was written as a vignette, and I do love Alex's gifts, but you've shown a real touch of something special here, and beyond Alex it's this story and its humanity that makes me want to see just what other stories are lurking inside of you.

I'll be watching you!

This was the first of your stories that I read and must say it was a great one. The close bond between mother and son and I can relate to the feeling of wanting to take care of your mother. Beautiful.

This was a really well-written story. You had patience, worked the dialogue nicely, built up to the action and when it finally came, made it very hot. This was just a terrific tale. Thank you for writing it.

I’m not a big fan of multi-part stories. That’s not a knock, it’s just me.

I really liked these two characters.

this line: Mom was fierce back then, even fearless; pissed off at the world and determined to carve a piece off for me and her and hold it up by the balls screaming in victory. But it all came slowly crumbling down as a monotonous reality set in; the bills mounted, the broken relationships piled up, work stagnated, and hopes dissolved into a mess of failures and shattered dreams.

and I skipped the sex part and read only the end. What a way to describe the maladies of modern life!!! Powerful.

Certain stories I’ve read, I go back to when I get bored with current posts. This one is at the top of that list. Really enjoy it.

Not often I comment on this site but credit where credits due. That was a good, enjoyable read.! Good stuff.

Captivating to the end, my favorite love story. Five star

That was worth reading just for the phrase, "chili con carnage". It's a ridiculous premise, of course: "the magic motheruck that fixed everything." But it's so well written that the premise is forgiveable. This is the first of your stories I have read. I'm looking forward to more.

This is the first time I have aver commented on a Literotica.com story and I must say this one was magnificent. I read a great deal from a number of different genres and this is one of the most uplifting stories that I have ever read. Thank You MagnusRhodes. It's good to read something that is so thoroughly enjoyable to read, and at the same time interesting and meaningful from a human interest standpoint.

This might be the best story I’ve read on here! Thanks!

Loved this story you made it seem so real wish you would have continued with them going forward with love and happiness!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Love it!

Awesome story I was hoping he would be able to take his mother away for a better life but you need to continue with this till they reach there new life together. Gave it 5 stars.

I know the Gods is a statement of the possibility of more than a single God however every time I hear it I cannot help but think it sounds ghetto. Love the story though.

Good story that could have been great. Showering together wasn't enough, there should have been something at the end. Jax and his mom just needed to stop at a motel for the night. There they could have truly enjoyed each other's bodies and fucked the shit out of each other.