All Comments on 'Mom Makes My Bully into My Boss'

Who was the target audience for this bit of idiocy?

The story was a structural nightmare, the characterizations were horrible, the writing was poor and the concept was just plain stupid.

Also I'm fairly certain they killed the goose that lays the golden egg, Todd will run the place into the ground in a couple of months and everyone will lose their jobs, but hey at least mommy dearest will have his big dick to console her after financial suicide.

As a victim of real life bullying, this story is an abomination. If your long term goal is for the bully to get his come-uppance, then good, if not then as previous commenters have said, the bar will be run into the ground and the mom will lose everything, even the bully when he sees the money run out. Where are you going with this?

Writing the same story over and over is just lazy and boring. Time for the kid to grow a pair. Cut his mother out of his life. Go work for the competition and help them put "The Fan" out of business. Get to a gym ad learn self defense. Bullys cave quickly when someone stands up to them. What Todd really needs is a lead pipe to the knees.

please don't post any more stories, this was totally awful. so bad it wasn't even worth any stars

I get that the loser was still totally clueless at the end that his mother and his bully were lovers, but the mother still could've gone further in humiliating the son while still holding the cards to her chest. She could've insulted him instead of just being apathetic. Also, there was just a one-line hint that she had been fucking him back in school, when he still bullied her son. Maybe hint a little more, even that she encouraged the bullying?

What’s your problem bro. Your mama got fucked by your class bully and u are suffering from PTSD syndromes. Get the fuck out of website

This was an absolutely terrible story. I only kept reading hoping that wasn’t how it ended. And the writing was just awful.

Ignore the naysayers, if this is the type of genre you like then more power to you. However your stories tend to be a bit too short and too rushed. Personally I would like it if you focus more on the sex between the mom and the bully. Most bullies are bigger and stronger than the wimp so try to focus more on the bully's size, physique and muscles.

Don't listen to the negative comments bro, keep posting amazing stories.

If writing is your hobby do yourself a favor, get a new one. This is one of if not the worst stories I have ever read on this site.

Anyone taking the time to write something negative here has time to do just that - complain for the sake of complaining. Nothing will ever please them.

People do appreciate bully worship stories, don't let those that don't dictate your creativity.

People complaining about the subject matter are missing the point. This seems to be some sort of son cuckhold coupled with him being oblivious. I don't think revenge is part of it, only the eventual discovery that his wife / gf / mother is fucking his bully and him doing absolutely nothing.

this although fiction condones bullying! please have it removed as it isn’t even sexual in any way.

amazing story. ignore the haters and people who clearly don't understand. they're not your audience. PLEASE make more!

I enjoy your stories a lot and this was a great starting premise, but the victims obliviousness reaches unbelievable proportions here. And we need to establish where his father is. Is his mother still married? This story also needed to be expanded a LOT more.

Justice jusstice JUUUUUSSSSTTTIIICCCEEEE

Need a story where the victim is a chick and she ends up bullied into a threesome with her mother.

The story mom hires sons bully needs a second piece where son gets revenge on both of them

She didn't care that. He bullied her son she betrayed her son and did it on purpose

Is this actually someone's fantasy? To have your mother choose someone who's tormented you over you? What sexual pleasure can you actually derive from this scenario? The author of this story needs counseling.