All Comments on 'Mom’s Become a Tease Ch. 00-13'

Pretty well written, a couple of grammar mistakes by misspelling, other than that well done. Hope you decide to continue the story, it could prove to be interesting.

Well it's a college kid's journal, the grammar isn't supposed to be good. As for spelling, I definitely make way more errors when writing erotica but I thought I had edited them all out. I'll check it over again. Glad you liked it though, working on Part 2 but no timetable.

Great read!

Nice character development with a plot that builds throughout.

Dude this was awesome.

I really enjoyed this story. It needs to be finished in at least two more chapters. I am looking forward for this to happen.

The most motivating factor is a mother's jealousy of her sis's affection towards her son. I purposely let mom see me holding my aunt's hand and teasing/flirting changed to seduction.

WOW! I need part 2. Great work