All Comments on 'Mom’s Best Friend'

ugh

Yikes.

You have some interesting works. This one seems over the top and outlandish. 30 men is too much but 20 is fine.

great story. keep it up!

Hard to suspend disbelief when talking about 30 person trains and pissing on chicken.

Very, hot enjoyed each page. You have a way of bringing hot and nasty together. There is so much more to explore with your character's. Keep up the good work.

Parts of the sex scenes are exciting but It’s just okay story, just too much stuff for nothing and why include killing off the girlfriend. Take care to proofread or get help editing.

Hi Jeff, pretty sure you based the character off yourself, tbh I stopped reading after your amazing and mentally healthy/extremely sensual "piss chicken" plot twist, more precisely I stopped reading after the female cop character got extremely excited watching you eat her signature "baked chicken a la piss" oh sorry...I meant Jeff.... anyway besides the dialogue being rigid and lacking contractions it was also clumsy to the point of cringe, now usually I try not to kink shame however that piss chicken idea is just weird man and the thought of you writing it in so quickly was simultaneously disturbing and hilarious to me that you or anyone would find that erotic... pretty...fowl...of you Jeffrey eh? Eeeeehhhhh!? ...

Anyhoo yes I understand it's fiction yes yes I know... baked piss is going to funk up the entire house dude c'mon man and besides that there's not enough herb's and spices on the planet to cover that up...so what... was it so damn hot and erotic and just absolutely crucial for that nipple sizzlin scene of her poisoning the Jeff dude with the entirely unbelievable boner killer Piss Chicken fetish of yours!?!?....lol I like you Jeff honestly you're my kind of scum so I'm going to try some of your other stuff I think you have a lot of potential as a writer, also I should thank you, I just called my best friend a "piss chicken sumbitch" and it went over great, I hope you haven't copyrighted it cause there's already talk about starting a biker gang called the PISS CHICKENS so keep it up sir