All Comments on 'Mom, Son, Injury, Balls'

Sorry. I stopped reading at 11"

Good pacing, keep it up!

You seriously need to learn how to write. You started off in first person, then randomly decided to use third person. You also constantly switch back and forth between past and present tense throughout the story. Not to mention the ridiculousness of the 11 inch dick. Very poor writing.

Tender story of unencumbered love. More sensual than erotic which pure motherly love will bring to a story. Very well written in content and mechanics with perfect description of amazing endowments. Perfect details in mom helping give relief with realistic amounts of cognitive dissonance.

Why not give him a 20" cock, about the same thickness as a telephone pole, the mom 48GG tits, and a magic pussy that can stretch to fit even the world's largest cock? Just to make it more believable?

Loved it but you need to FTDS. 5/5 Following author!

I think you should have harped on the 11" penis more often. You only brought it up four times in a two page story. What if your readers forgot about this bullshit? Of course, at one point, it's even 11 and a half inches long, so he must have been REALLY excited for the world's hottest, sexiest mom, right?

Stopped at 11 inch…..

story sounds like it was written by a teenage geek.

Mother being a nurse this should have been common place for a patient even if a relative. Being someone who worked at a hospital it happens more often than one might think, nurses hope the family takes care of it during visiting hours.

I agree with previous post, erotic posts do not require males to have baseball bats and women to look like milk cows to be erotic. Normal size people are even more erotic than monsters.

Very hot. Looking forward to the next chapter. In the next chapter, please be mindful of your point of view (POV). You started this story

You started this story writing in the first person and then abruptly switched to the third person.

just wanted to get this out there- This is my first story and I apologize for many grammatical errors, especially switching tenses so often. I wrote this in less than a day without the proper amount of proof reading. The next chapter won't have that issue. Also apparently huge penis's make people mad so if you're not into that you probably shouldn't read this story. I don't claim to be an author in any way just wanted to share a fun story I thought of

Ive seen colouring books with a better story than this!

Outstanding!!!!

Great start to a hot story! Keep this going! 5⭐

Great story love the build up also. Keep writing and don't bother with the critics. The build up evens out the larger sized cock and tits. Looking forward to reading more.

How self-absorbed do you have to be to critique an author for not catering to your specific tastes? If an 11" dick upsets, just move on! No one needs you to write a comment about how you can't enjoy unrealistic proportions.

You just keep doing you man. Some of the criticism is constructive but don’t bother listening to the simple complaints. This story was great and I can’t wait for part 2.

I stopped at 11”. *

I lost interest at the 11" part. Good luck.

Why does everyone in these stories always have 11'' 12'' 13'' dicks is redundant

Great first submission. It's all fantasy, and fantasies can be outrageous and still be entertaining. I am asking you to write a sequel to this, cause I'm hoping that Emily will further explore her limits!

And if you need someone to proof read and give you some constructive criticisms before it gets submitted, let me know. I'm no pro either, but it never hurts to get a second pair of eyes on something.

Great story! 5/5. Sure some of the dialoge should be in different paragraphs not one big one, but thats a simple fix and doesn’t really take away from the whole story at all. Sure people are loosing interest at 11 inch dicks but you keep writing about it, they do exist and may be in a minority, and hell this is a fantasy after all.

Great first story. Keep up the good work.

This was a really good story. Needs a Part 2 til aleast when the cast come off. Keep up the stories.

Reminds me of the time when I had a tight foreskin in my late teens,my mother had worked as a nurse until she changed careers,I told her that I had a problem down below and asked her to make an appointment for me at the doctors,there's no need for that she said and asked me what my problem was, I really didn't want to discuss it with my mother but she insisted,I told her that my foreskin was tight and she asked if it was tight when I was soft or hard? Mum I said! I've got to ask you she said, when I'm hard I told her! OK she said you know what's next? Mum I can't I said! Oh shut up she said I've seen lots of dicks! Cmon I haven't got all day and pulled my shorts down, my cock was soft and I felt so embarrassed as I tried to get hard, mum I can't I told her! She undid a few of the buttons on her shirt and her cleavage was there infront of me! I instantly started to get hard! Jesus mum said I can see why it's tight love your dick is to big for it! Does it hurt if I do this mum asked me? With her finger she touched my cock just underneath my bell end! A little bit I told her, I'm going to be gentle with it she said and slowly pulled my foreskin over my bell end! How is that mum asked? A little bit sore I said then she started getting faster with her strokes! Feel okay she said? Yes mum it does! Everything looks fine to me aswell love, tell me if you're going to cum won't you? With that I fired my cum on her neck and tits!!! Sorry mum I said

Yeah, no. You lost me at 11” cock and 34k cup. Bigger rarely makes for a better story IMO.

Liked the story but there was no incest just a mother jacking off her son gave it a 4, but you need to continue further!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good first story! Hopefully there'll be a follow-up chapter soon. Five stars and a favorite point!

Great story, I wish there was a part two

I really enjoyed the story and wish I could have been with his mother. Maybe next time 😈

This is one of the best stories I've read in my entire my life.