All Comments on 'Mom Son Sex Tales Pt. 02'

Some tense and sequence problems, along with punctuation errors. Let's chalk those up to initial excitement.

You must read your story, proof read, to identify these mistakes. A suggestion I have read, made by another reader, is to record your work while proof reading, then listen to your recording while following theb'printed" words.

You show good potential if you can write without identifying speech or speakers.

With experience come improvement.

Looking forward to more from you, with growth coming alongside each submission.

Keep mom satisfied as your storys improve. Good start.

What does " I was like" mean?