All Comments on 'Mom, This is So Wrong'

It was interestingly until the lame ending. Could of been a five but the ending ruined all the fun.

i pretty much agree with Mad Max- pretty lame ending. But it started before the ending: why in the world would they film themselves on a company phone? She FORGOT it was synced? What lawyer forgets details like that? Why oh why would William take the phone call with the two of them in bed naked together? It Makes for a LOT of unnecessary drama. William's wife, Kate, raises her mother-in-law and husband's child. That works. A bit convenient, but it works.

I still give this story a 5, cuz it's smoking hot and i almost got there a second time til that fucked up ending wilted me! Thanks for writing! You're one of my faves for mother son escapades!

I agree with the first reviewer...a really good story right up until the really bad ending.

William had dirty on Margret as well. Very lame ending.

Really good story until the strange ending. Still hits a 5/5

Lame ending to a story with no likable characters.

I loved the story but the ending seemed rushed, like you lost interest.

Needs second chapter

Margaret is a psycho. Does this story take place in a universe with no plan B pills? Whatever.

Damn! Another great story for you.

I would like a second chapter.

you would have got a 5 but you do know there is a next morning pill that a woman can take RIGHT?