All Comments on 'Mom Under Control'

what is the appeal in having sex with a mindless creature?

it's essentially having sex with yourself.

masturbation.

Zero romance or affection. No memory of the sex? Temporary? Stupid.

Honestly I'd read a part 2.

Anonymous, nice troll. Dumbest comment of the year.

Looking forward to next part.

For the love of god please tell me you were being satirical with the Elon bit. It was accurate, because he's a piece of shit, but his fans know that, too.

@First Anonymous

Well, the idea of a total control over someone can be pretty arousing if you're into that, obviously, plus, the fact that such a person wouldn't object to fulfilling basically any fantasy of yours they could and you wanted them to is also a nice plus.

@muskyboy

I'm sorry that you didn't like this story, but, personally, stories with overt, permanent mind control always rubbed me just a bit too wrong when it comes to the morality of it to write one myself.

@Second & Third Anonymous

I'm glad that you guys feel that way! I'm not sure about a sequel to this, for reasons which I believe are obvious from the story itself, but you can definitely expect a lot of stories similar to this one coming from me in the future.

@Braincrash

Don't know about that actually, he was definitely trolling at least a bit, but the question itself was actually a pretty good one I'd say.

@sxxyimpulse

Of course I was, don't worry :D. I just decided to have a bit of a fun with the exposition, since I feared it being a bit too long and boring otherwise, that's all. Also, it's hard to deny that it fit pretty nicely.

I have mixed views on this. For starters I'd have preferred if it had a more in depth story with more snu snu instead of it being a simple blow and titty job I was also a bit co fused with the whole temporary part of it. Does she become a mindless drone for the governors or simply goes back to how things were with her son? Also he seems rather detached and doesn't seem to care that his mum is practically a slave to whomever hack her micro chip and activates her. Though the idea behind it is also pretty good as well. I'll give it a 5/10 to represent my mixed opinion. Definitely see something enjoyable out of this.

I enjoyed the story, as far as it went, but it certainly seems like it was only a first part of a longer story; he has six more days and all sorts of positions/acts to try out…but it sounds like you aren’t planning on continuing? Too bad…

@Fourth Anonymous

I can definitely understand your mixed opinion of this story. I'll admit, I probably should've added a bit more depth to it all, but at the time, this progression of story was enough to satisfy me and turn me on with the sex scenes there. The temporary part means that, after everything is over, she simply goes back to normal, as if nothing had happened. The son is definitely detached, though, in that case, I was trying to portray him as a maybe too stereotypical geek who's just socially withdrawn in general. Plus, there's the fact that his life had just gone completely bonkers, going from a completely normal life into something surreal and straight out of a dream in a matter of minutes really, so, he simply hasn't really processed it and has no idea just how to react to what had just happened. Thank you for the objective and, ultimately, positive review.

@1003565

I'll admit, I wasn't, but I could :D. I've wanted, for a longer time by now, to focus on fleshing out and continuing some of my stories people have really liked, and this one could be quite easy to continue.

There were so many places this could have gone to make it an excellent story. Since the story wasn't 3 to 4 pages long, you should have continued the story with a follow up. There really should be some hot mother/son pussy fucking. He had full control over her. He should have told his mom to act like she did with his dad when they fucked. This is "Incest/Taboo" after all. Since you left your story so incomplete and apparently don't intend on doing anything more with it, I barely gave you 3 Stars. I not very critical of beginners, I don't want to discourage them.

@OI8U2

Thanks for the honest feedback, I appreciate it. I actually definitely think of making some followup to this story, those two definitely hadn't said their last word and there's just too much potential in it to just let it be, but there's a lot of other stories I'm also working at, and not just for this site, so that's definitely at least a few months away. That said, when it eventually finally gets published, I sure hope you'll like it.