All Comments on 'Mom! We Can't Do That Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Awesome story. Too bad my mom didn't react this way when I found Polaroids of her. She never stopped me from spying on her though as she left her bedroom door open often.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 2 years ago
Great ending

To a great great story.

Lee2012Lee2012over 2 years ago

William just popped up out if nowhere about half way through page one. Janette gies from a smart young lady to become a stripper, a top-nude model, a totally nude to , up jump the devil, a porn star. Still, some hot action from an 18 year old who fuck like a machine!!? Still 4*

jcus0511jcus0511over 2 years ago

Cool story down & dirty no mucking about or pretence. Good quick read thanks.

CheerfulVoidCheerfulVoidover 2 years ago

Hmm... This is chapter 1? Will William and Janette's adventures continue? We can only hope. I enjoyed this chapter, thanks for sharing.

chytownchytownover 2 years ago

***Thanks for the read.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Very nice story but where did the baby come from not much info on that?? It just popped into the story and then he was 18 and fucking his nom!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was to short for a 5 gave it a 4!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AkpervertAkpervert7 months ago

This was a quick buildup, and really quick from first view to bed. But the descriptions were pretty HOT!

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I'm mature and longtime happily married. I started to write erotic fiction in the begining of Feb 2018 after reading it for a few years on e-books, and thought I have enough ideas I could write like this,then found this site and a few others of the same so had the incentive to...