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Click hereI ended up not going home. I spent the night going back and forth to all three rooms to check on all of them. Several times during the night, they had to bring Carrie back and once they had to bring Donna back, but in the end all three lived.
I got to go in and see Stephanie a couple more times that night and each time I whispered my life's dream. Each time, Stephanie would squeeze my hand.
I spent as much time as I could at the hospital for the next week and then I was hit with a sledge hammer. Donna was being transferred to Switzerland, to set up her system in the European Division, and Stephanie was being transferred to a hospital there. I was heartbroken. By the time I heard and made it to the hospital, Stephanie and Donna were gone.
I just sat on the grass out front of the hospital until Dad drove up and honked. Still, I didn't move and Dad came over to sit beside me. He didn't say a word, he just sat with me. After a few minutes, I said, "Let's go home."
- COMMENTS
Foxterot7aabout 2 months agoFamily history brings clarity to the story. I like to understand why characters do the things they do. I am more interested in character development and logical plot development then simple sex. For example, I liked the mother's explaination about the difference between sex and mental attachment. 5 star rating.
DaktoRtoover 13 years agoAuthorIt's life, I guess. People come in to your life, they go out of your life. They live, they die. Good and Bad things happen. One writes from memories and so reality mingles with fantasy. That's the way I see his writing anyway.
MizTover 13 years agoWill thinks change now that William is in love. And yes, sometimes it takes almost loosing someone to realize you love them. It will be interesting to see where you go from here.
Hectorx1over 13 years agoThis charter had lot stuff happing and character accepting thing to easily. I remember the first charter how William spend hours coming to terms with how her mother behaves and now he just accept fucking his sister and grandma without hesitation. I guess for me it feel a bit rush this whole new family dynamics.
Anonymousover 13 years agoI would like to see karen again in the story. She could continue to fuck black men and boys at some motel. Later Joe could find out.
digdaddyrichover 13 years agoA hell of a lot is going on in this chapter.
Sexually erotic, kinky and sad all in the same chapter.
The wreck plus the hospital scenes threw me for a while, I thought for a bit, that it didn't fit until I thought that it might be building up for
William falling in love for the first time.
The story is very complex and it makes the reader to follow the story closely or it will be hard to keep up with what the author is trying to tell.
Nicely done, thanks
mbaabdover 13 years agoDon't understand the Joe and his parents thread's place in the plot. The accident is out of the above story! If it brings him closer to Stephainie that is good. I like that part of the story. Why kill someone? How could Donna have a broken neck and give him hugs in various rooms of the hospital? Was the hugger Liz?
Overall like the story. Keep it going.
