by DaktoRto
A good story has to have a great premise, a great set-up. With our intrepid narrator a horny son conveniently hidden, able to hear and watch some sexy 'going on', this thing is just great. The best part is that the mom is at the tender mercy of the boss, but the viewer (her son, and the reader too in effect) gets that same feeling. I think I might have done more with her if I had such power, but what we read is quite sufficient...bravo!
This was really interesting. I would like to suggest a plot. The black guy could take the mom to get tattooed and pierced record it on video.
DaktoRTO: Sorry man, but I don't dig the interracial stuff. AnHoaRifleman
Perhaps her husband has a small cock and he isn't taking care of her at home. With that said I think that his mom is a real slut, and he might be hung up over her. But why would a young boy want to fuck a slut?
He knows that he would never be able to satisfy her when she is fucking two full grown men, unless he has a cock like a bull which wouldn't be very realistic.
I don;t see how this story can work out with the facts that have been given thus far.
This was supposed to be interesting? Also interesting, you capitalized black, but not white.
Oh my God :))))
- Hehehehe .. You're not white and you're very, very young? :)))
Yes??
It is a story & the storyline may be shink to 24 hrs.
A married women who fucks her boss may engage in the erotic role play when they are alone say inside his office or a hotel room.
A married woman and a mother who is having an affair can live 2 parallel lives, 2 narratives of you wish, & she can seamlessly beam herself back and forth.
Also we can tell that the wife has a WILD side & she very open minded when it comes to sex.
The wife is not a slut.
Ideally what happens at work will stay at work.
I do not know why I did not like this chapter. Probably because the characters were not developed, either emotionally nor psychologically. Tghe father/husband's initial reaction were within normal limits, psychologically and/or psychiatrically. Why he changed his demeaner is not explained. Too many questions and no answers. Probably, these questions will be answered in following chapters.