by Bry1977
This story was great the first time I read it a while ago. But since you have rewritten it, it's still good. But again I hope you do a second chapter this time..
It promises another chapter which looks to be even more kinky. The idea of the cheating mother reminds me of the movie TABOO. The great scene in that movie is the daughter having sex with Dad on the bed next to her mother. The mother is crying and feeling sorry for herself because she has been caught cheating and now the daughter is getting even by mixing it up with Dad.
Definitely need the next chapter in this one. It has the buildup for a good series.
I remember this story, It's been quite a while since I read it last time, it was good back then too..
This too far over the top. That daughter is nuts. No one to root for in this tale of depravity.