All Comments on 'Mommy Adriana, I Will Obey You'

by Gretatv

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Very fine writing!

Sweet Greta, you are a very fine writer and your talents are shining brighter as your stories go along! You bring Mommy Adriana into my very own bedroom every night and she is the masterful sexual guide into the early morning hours. Please continue, sharing yourself as freely as Mommy Adriana orders you.

(Mrs.) S L

msboy8msboy8almost 19 years ago
Interesting

you are a good writer and I realize english is not your first language. What I think you should do is to use an editor, one whose primary language is english.

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