by SookieHaze7
Hah! I almost wrote “Cucked By Santa” as a lark before deciding on something different. Great minds. :D
An outstanding first story and I hope you plan to write more soon.
If you are going to cheat with someone, Santa appears to be the best choice.
My only nit pick would be this. She notes that she is not having any problems despite being unable to breath while deepthroating Santa. Obviously, this is some more Santa Clause Magic. A bit later, however, she mentions having to swallow a lot just to allow her to get some air. It just struck me as a bit odd that the "I don't need air" magic would go away before she was completely finished with the blow job. As I said, it's a tiny thing in an overall wonderful story.
Santa Baby, Cumm right down my...
What? No sports car left under the tree? Santa needs to take better care of his babes. I wonder if that's why my wife smiles a lot at Christmas, hmmmm. Great story. Clear descriptions, no grammar or spelling flaws that I saw and great story telling flow. Loved it. Welcome aboard to a new writer!
At least you didnt name santa jamal and she isnt pregnant. Write a part 2 where mrs clause had to do next years trip as santa got divorced and she now screws the husbands as revenge.
OH, HELL NO!! Mr. C doesn't do that. How will she feel when her daughter grows, gets married, and bangs whoever or whatever that was on Christmas Eve?? Did she check for horns and a tail?? The Man does not do that. And the party they went to. Her stepfather? Wonder why?? Did Dad find out and divorce his cheating slut wife ?? I wonder. Mr. C says you will be hearing from the law firm in Newark, New Jersey that the North Pole uses for all Legal matters in the U.S. Not to mention the troll squad and being on the naughty list for the rest of your life for libel, slander, and being a dick. Shame on you, SookieHaze7.
Yeah, I know it's only a story, but it's Christmas, for goodness' sake. 2 stars for the well-told story, minus 5 for the content. The Bear didn't like it.
The BEAR
Oh, c'mon now! She wasn't a skank or a cheating whore; it was SANTA!
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"I'd given blow jobs before, though mostly to my husband before we married. It had always been something I did for the guy."
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And this was Santa's present to her husband; even after Christmas morning, she retained her new-found love for sucking cock, and the magical deep throat ability!
Have to agree with LT56. Santa don't do that. I know, this is literotica, nothing is sacred here. But it doesn't mean we have to like it and give it stars. This was still better than a dozen purring wanton wives scrambling for a bbc, to be sure, but just barely. For that singular reason it scored better. Don't stop writing, just understand that sometimes, some of us, still hold on to things that are special to us.
Not cute at all. Just a Christmas whore story. Our old bi cuck Ic69 wants this Santa under his tree too.
A pretty fucked up perversion of the Christmas tradition. Wonder how she'll feel when she learns her husband has been rutting with the Easter Playboy Bunny?
So the writer has an open marriage fucks around a lot but the poor cuck husband stays at home and jerks off to her "stories" and so the female writer then writes a cuck and skank story about fucking Santa once a year. Guess what her other stories are going to be about.
This was a cute Christmas story with some good imagination. Don’t pay any attention to the negative comments from small minded people who want to put you in their space with their judgments. To the commenters: You’re on an erotica website, the story obviously has non- reality components. If you can’t handle other people’s lives or fantasies you shouldn’t read those stories but don’t put them down because the writer doesn’t live by your moral code. Don’t expect a reality that meets your moral judgement. To the author: If your thing is an open marriage and you play much more than your husband and he’s fine with that then it’s good that you two have a mutually agreeable arrangement that suits both of your needs. Keep writing! Greg
Makes me wonder what the devil poor hubby did to deserve that kind of crap for Christmas.
⭐⭐ What a great story about a hypocrite who pretends to keep a naughty and nice reward list and flips the magic whore switch and fucks married women for sport. Don't trust a woman with dried jizz overspray and tinsel hanging from her pussy christmas morning.
Ah....so the Christmas Spirit is to cheat on a spouse? Well, color me surprised! I guess I missed that holiday special 😜. Well written, but not my cup of tea.
Please keep writing. You have a good imagination and would be very interested in reading whatever else you may desire to post.
Sincerely,
Payenbrant
Very funny. It's a fantasy, and everyone is entitled to have one such. Not realistic but sexy!
LT56Linebacker is a moron to get upset over this!
So now February Sucks moves back two months to December; and the celebrity hall pass is with an elf rather than a sports star.