by ohioviper69
Women don't make men out of boys, that takes a man. Sex doesn't make you a man, look at all the teenage pregnancies. That was probably a mom that didn't teach her son shit. Pathetic story
Stick with one person singular instead of switching from one to the other. It makes the story easier to follow and doesn’t break up the flow
Ignore the anonymous haters. They can’t even bother to join or write their own stories.
Very nice story although it was short gave it 5 stars, but you need to continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice story but you need to write more of this it was a bit short. Have mommy teach him more cause she loves it gave it 4 stars because it was too short.