All Comments on 'Mommy Makes Me A Man Pt. 01'

by ohioviper69

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Women don't make men out of boys, that takes a man. Sex doesn't make you a man, look at all the teenage pregnancies. That was probably a mom that didn't teach her son shit. Pathetic story

cozymel43cozymel43about 1 year ago

he needs a proofreader.

beckbuckleybeckbuckleyabout 1 year ago

Stop the "back in my day" talk. It's condescending and annoying.

WhipmasterWhipmasterabout 1 year ago

Stick with one person singular instead of switching from one to the other. It makes the story easier to follow and doesn’t break up the flow

WhipmasterWhipmasterabout 1 year ago

Ignore the anonymous haters. They can’t even bother to join or write their own stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Very nice story although it was short gave it 5 stars, but you need to continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

FeltfixerFeltfixerabout 1 year ago

Quite a good story apart from the 10 inch cock.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Nice story but you need to write more of this it was a bit short. Have mommy teach him more cause she loves it gave it 4 stars because it was too short.

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