All Comments on 'Mommy Talk: A Daughter's Offer'

yes, i would love it.

Yes, I would love to see more. How about Ashley and Frans moms getting together. Or a Mothers and Daughters orgy.

yes more plz

Yes, please bring Fran over, maybe her mom as well!!!

Yes write part 2

Abso-fucking-lutely want to have Fran come over. That's really hot! 🔥

more please

More please

More please

Please do continue with Payton being a mommy slut pet for Fran. I really enjoyed this story. Plus, I admire the bulk, the length and the range of your work. Mega kudos!!

WS

After the rigorous fuck session she just gets dressed and goes on a date?

Love to see what happens next!

Hi I would love to know what happens next.

I have been reading you stories for the last two years and love all your adventures.

Wonderful---how about Fran and her mom showing up!

Another great story. Can't wait for Fran to come over and we could have another great story. Maybe this will lead to a series if Frans mother joins the party.

More please

Ashley needs ro bring home a cream pie for Mommy

Definitely need more!!

DAMN.. YES..!!

I surely enjoyed reading this.. and wanted to even try it for myself as well..!! Please.. let me give it a try and enjoying it until the end,..!!

JIM..!!

Yes, please, more!

Yes, please, more!

Fran and later her Mommy for a Mommy / Mommy duo, then a daughter Mommy swap with the four of them, line those Mommies up and fuck them doggy style

This whole premise is stolen from girlsway.

Ariana Marie and Eva Addams

Even included the ‘you need a fuck buddy comment’

Pretty fucking greasy to try and pass it as original

Can't wait for part 2 and more

Part 2 please, but with fran's mom not fran

Too rushed, mommy talk is okay but this story way too many "mommy". Score: 3.

Daughter needs to bring home a creampie for Mommy

+1 for the Fran cums over and then more as the rest of the girls cum over.

Yes!!

Please continue with your story!

The 1st part was fantastic!

For you an automatic 5 stars and yes, please tell us more about what happens later that night and all of the days to come.

Very erotic

I bet you have the Fran story already in the can!!

Oh Yes Please.

Yes I would like to read more of this story. It is very good like all your stories SSL.

Yes more please and Ashley never did get fucked by her mommy with the strap on.

Please add chapter 2, 3, and/or 4 or more. This story has so many possibilities. LOVED LOVED LOVED IT!

Fran AND Fran's Moom!

It needs to continue and entertain all the girls

This was an incredibly hot hot story! I need more!

Smoking hot. What does Fran have in store?

I do hope your life is as beautiful as your words.

Please continue this story

yes I would like to hear more!

Yes please.

As it's already been said, premise and some dialogue lifted from Girlsway.

I honestly expected more from you. Even if this wasn't stolen it's not even close to your usual standard.

https://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php?viewkey=ph61f5dab1ccb13

Thought I’d heard it before

Continue please!

I love the concept.

I would have preferred a bit less dialog, which tended to get a bit repetitious, and more detailed descriptions. Did her mother's breasts have big or small aureoles? Were they pink or brown? Did she nurse Ashley when she was an infant? If so, a few remarks about "returning to the teat" would have been erotic. Most of all, I was waiting for a surprise ending -- e.g., the boyfriend comes over, rings the bell, is not heard, and lets himself in. A whole new level of erotic complication when he shows up in the bedroom, hungry cock in hand.

Stolen from someone else or not, this story is FUCKING Hot !

Women know what women enjoy and this story tells what they like.

Too bad guys can't let go like that !

Continue please!

To comment 24-ish.

In the opening credits, I recognize what inspired the story as it has one of my favourite moments in porn.

Feel it’s unfair to criticize me on that if you don’t read the actual comments that open the story.

Jasmine

Delightfully written very hot. Let's see if Frans available.

Yes more, Fran and mom also mom and Ashley’s boyfriend

What a hot story and yes i'd like to read more about Mom Fran and who knos else.

One concern i have is the comment that your story is "stolen" from some where......................

OZ Day 2023

I have watched that movie so many times and I could almost say the words before I read them. Sad Jasmine you work is always orginal is this a case of writers block

What kind of mother would be talked into sex with her daughter that easily. With all the over the top dialog it seemed like something a teenage boy would write.

I loved it. You're a good writer!

Hell yes! Add Fran to the party. In fact, add Fran's mum to the party as well. More sexiness is better in every way.

Ciao

Yes excellent. Maybe include the boy friend when they get back home

Oh yes, MORE please.

I really enjoy your stories and this one was great

Please continue with the events of the evening

Can't wait to share this with my wife and our girlfriend we so love

role-playing to your stories

Absolutely !! I would love to know what happens next. Can't wait to read more of this hot story

Can't wait for Fran to get involved

MY cock is throbbing and dripping pre cum

And it tastes great

This is a story that has to carry on and on and on.

Introducing more characters (Mother & Daughters friends)

I don't mean to be rude, but I think this is one of the weakest stories of yours that I've read. The dialogue falls apart in the middle, and your normally precise character development just isn't there

Authors note 2:

For a couple complaining this was stolen from girlsway. I referenced in the note at the beginning that it was that scene that inspired the idea of the story. It is one of my favourite starts to a story as Arianna is just so cute and sweet in her role at the beginning.

What I am learning is that many do not read the opening comments.

Anyways, I have. A few stories that are based in porn scenes. I find porn scenes sometimes have a hot moment that triggers an idea and I use that as inspiration to write more detailed set-ups. Like I did to this one.

If you watch the video you will see where I got the idea from, where I changed it dramatically and where a I gave it homage.

Jasmine

To the people who liked it, part two, which is again inspired by part 2 of the actual two part series, is in the works.

I liked the way the story unfolded between mother and daughter. Now one of the daughter's friend might be coming over. This story could go on for many adventures. 5 stars.

More please

Dear Jasmine.

I’ve read many of your stories over the years. Many of them are absolutely amazing. And gave 5 stars to most of them. I myself am an author with a few lesbian stories on this site. But I really didn’t like this one. I have to agree with the comment above. This is weak and seems like it was written by a teenage boy.

And please, for god sake, stop saying, “for some reason I…’ It’s just lazy. Please don’t insult your readers intelligence and give us a real reason why the character wants to do something.

You make this sound like incest is common place. I can suspend disbelief, but only so far.

As for this being a Valentines submission. I think it misses the mark. Well, in my opinion anyway. I would expect a romantic love of some kind for a valentine story. Not just sex that happened to be on Valentine’s Day.

I still love most of your work. Just not this one.

excellent description of the action. very good, worth a second read after Fran's encounter.

looking forward to see how this story develops

Excellent story, now on to the threesome, and some more somes.

Please write more with these characters! 5 Stars, loved the story

Just 4 stars. I love your stories but this one had a few to many "mommies" in it. :D

It doesn't seem to be your best work.... Send me someone hacked your account. I couldn't get into it. Everytime I read "the mom" I was put off feeling like a teen boy wrote it

This was a great story and I hope it is continued!

Hot, hot, hot!

Yes, send Fran in for some more lesbian action...

Yes please cont... this story

Great story. Definitely want to see what happens next with Fran

amazing story..keep it going with fran and her other lovers

yes i also like others more than this one

I’d live to hear what happens with Fran 😉

OH wow.........................love how it turned out. There are so many avenues these two could explore, maybe even end up seducing 'dads' new plaything. Just a thought.

And yes, see how Fran fits into their plans and even Fran's mum, being mommy's best friend could also be a side story.

Loved it, Will there be a part 2 with Fran and/or her mom making an appearance

More please.

i just kinda love that you have your own tag now

Great story. Love to read more. Nice job.

Omg Jasmine

You simply cannot leave it there xx

Love Carmella xx

I fast foreword till the end to comment , even before i read , that , ! Cant wait, always looking forward to your stories . Cant wait,

Great story!!!

I just love M-D incest stories. I definitely want to see where this goes. Please, Mommy?

I think we need to learn why Mommy has a strapon dick in her drawers... What was she planning to do with it? With whom?

Yes, the two teen sluts submit to the two slutty moms, anal lesbian incest

460. Of course I want to go further with this hot tale. Perhaps with Fran, but maybe with the club and their mothers or the return by Ashley for a threesome with her mom and Fran. I love your girl on girl action.

great story waiting for chapter 2

Please keep going with this storyline!

Good story, and it's waiting for chapter 2.

Great story. YES! I want to hear the next party with Fran.

Wow this story is amazing!! I only found it now when I saw the sequel posted. I’ll be reading that next ;) can’t wait to see what mommy and Fran do together…

Can't believe I missed this one. Glad I caught Chapter 2 which led me to read this. Gotta wonder if Mike is going to get a mother-and-daughter fuck later. Very arousing. Five stars. Now I'm going to read the next chapter.