All Comments on 'Mommy Talk: A Daughter's Offer'

Good story!!!!!!!

sexiest part is mother eating daughter out

You are always amazing. Did you continue with Fran or the club that they were in? Always enjoy your stories.

Peace

Yes, yes. I really want to know how mom and Fran get along. Even a threesome would be so hot!

Next part please ! Loved it .

Thank you so much. What a great story. Amazing. I love my mothers and daughters get together. Wonderful keep writing great great story.

stepdaughter stepdad she 20 stepdad 45 her mam had died leaving me with my sexy stepdaughter, she knew i looked at her knew me eyes looked all over her young sexy body tight low cut blouse no bras the shapes of her huge breasts her long nipples clearly showing through her blouse her short skirts showing lots of leg strong thighs sat on the sofa facing me her legs slightly open my eyes looking trying to see between her legs trying to see more wanting to see her panties a hard bulge in my trousers my eyes trying to see between her lovely legs saw her legs opening slowly wider yes really wide all the way up her shirt all the way god no panties she's got no panties on i'm looking at her pussy no hairs at all i'm looking at it, my cocks rock hard now jumping in my trousers her voice soft do you like looking at my fanny daddy, my eyes looking up in to hers panting you know i fucking do, you want me don';t you daddy you want to fuck me, no not fuck i want to make love to you slow gentle deep i want to make you mine all mine, just you daddy only you, yes just me only me, show me your cock daddy, she watched as my fingers unzipped my trousers watched as my hand went inside my trousers her eyes widened as i got my hard cock out, she gasped loudly it its big daddy its really big i i'll be tight for you, you're not a virgin are you, no daddy god i'll feel like a virgin for your big cock, bed my bed our bed from now on naked together now, yes daddy, our bed naked looking all over her naked body my finger deep in her soaking wet pussy daddy daddy ooh daddy you you're cock get you cock in my fanny do me now let me cum on your cock.

JT

a lot better thanmoet ive ever read

Another great story hopefully you will put a few illustration stories to this title

Omg, what an absolutely, fucking amazing story this was. I just now came across it as I was getting ready to read tbe sequel to it. Even though it wasn't necessary to read this one first, I had to because I wanted to read about her daughter fucking her mommy ( oh yes, the mommy talk is so very hot, sexy and downright dirty). I gave it 5 stars, would have given it more if I'd been able to!! Can't wait to read about what Fran did to Payton later that night.......mmmmmmmmmmm, what filthy thoughts I have already regarding that. For me, mommy/daughter incest sex is just as hot as daddy/daughter incest sex. Wish I'd had a daughter of my own to fuck, as my first wife sure didn't like to fuck. ( in case you might be wondering, 1955 is the year I was born )

Can't believe I missed this one. Glad I caught Chapter 2 which led me to read this. Gotta wonder if Mike is going to get a mother-and-daughter fuck later. Very arousing. Five stars. Now I'm going to read the next chapter.

Wow this story is amazing!! I only found it now when I saw the sequel posted. I’ll be reading that next ;) can’t wait to see what mommy and Fran do together…

Great story. YES! I want to hear the next party with Fran.

Good story, and it's waiting for chapter 2.

Please keep going with this storyline!

great story waiting for chapter 2

460. Of course I want to go further with this hot tale. Perhaps with Fran, but maybe with the club and their mothers or the return by Ashley for a threesome with her mom and Fran. I love your girl on girl action.

Yes, the two teen sluts submit to the two slutty moms, anal lesbian incest

I think we need to learn why Mommy has a strapon dick in her drawers... What was she planning to do with it? With whom?

I just love M-D incest stories. I definitely want to see where this goes. Please, Mommy?

Great story!!!

I fast foreword till the end to comment , even before i read , that , ! Cant wait, always looking forward to your stories . Cant wait,

Omg Jasmine

You simply cannot leave it there xx

Love Carmella xx

Great story. Love to read more. Nice job.

i just kinda love that you have your own tag now

More please.

Loved it, Will there be a part 2 with Fran and/or her mom making an appearance

OH wow.........................love how it turned out. There are so many avenues these two could explore, maybe even end up seducing 'dads' new plaything. Just a thought.

And yes, see how Fran fits into their plans and even Fran's mum, being mommy's best friend could also be a side story.

I’d live to hear what happens with Fran 😉

yes i also like others more than this one

amazing story..keep it going with fran and her other lovers

Great story. Definitely want to see what happens next with Fran

Yes please cont... this story

Hot, hot, hot!

Yes, send Fran in for some more lesbian action...

This was a great story and I hope it is continued!

It doesn't seem to be your best work.... Send me someone hacked your account. I couldn't get into it. Everytime I read "the mom" I was put off feeling like a teen boy wrote it

Just 4 stars. I love your stories but this one had a few to many "mommies" in it. :D

Please write more with these characters! 5 Stars, loved the story

Excellent story, now on to the threesome, and some more somes.

looking forward to see how this story develops

excellent description of the action. very good, worth a second read after Fran's encounter.

Dear Jasmine.

I’ve read many of your stories over the years. Many of them are absolutely amazing. And gave 5 stars to most of them. I myself am an author with a few lesbian stories on this site. But I really didn’t like this one. I have to agree with the comment above. This is weak and seems like it was written by a teenage boy.

And please, for god sake, stop saying, “for some reason I…’ It’s just lazy. Please don’t insult your readers intelligence and give us a real reason why the character wants to do something.

You make this sound like incest is common place. I can suspend disbelief, but only so far.

As for this being a Valentines submission. I think it misses the mark. Well, in my opinion anyway. I would expect a romantic love of some kind for a valentine story. Not just sex that happened to be on Valentine’s Day.

I still love most of your work. Just not this one.

More please

I liked the way the story unfolded between mother and daughter. Now one of the daughter's friend might be coming over. This story could go on for many adventures. 5 stars.

Authors note 2:

For a couple complaining this was stolen from girlsway. I referenced in the note at the beginning that it was that scene that inspired the idea of the story. It is one of my favourite starts to a story as Arianna is just so cute and sweet in her role at the beginning.

What I am learning is that many do not read the opening comments.

Anyways, I have. A few stories that are based in porn scenes. I find porn scenes sometimes have a hot moment that triggers an idea and I use that as inspiration to write more detailed set-ups. Like I did to this one.

If you watch the video you will see where I got the idea from, where I changed it dramatically and where a I gave it homage.

Jasmine

To the people who liked it, part two, which is again inspired by part 2 of the actual two part series, is in the works.

I don't mean to be rude, but I think this is one of the weakest stories of yours that I've read. The dialogue falls apart in the middle, and your normally precise character development just isn't there

This is a story that has to carry on and on and on.

Introducing more characters (Mother & Daughters friends)

Can't wait for Fran to get involved

MY cock is throbbing and dripping pre cum

And it tastes great

Absolutely !! I would love to know what happens next. Can't wait to read more of this hot story

I really enjoy your stories and this one was great

Please continue with the events of the evening

Can't wait to share this with my wife and our girlfriend we so love

role-playing to your stories

Oh yes, MORE please.

Yes excellent. Maybe include the boy friend when they get back home

Hell yes! Add Fran to the party. In fact, add Fran's mum to the party as well. More sexiness is better in every way.

Ciao

I loved it. You're a good writer!

What kind of mother would be talked into sex with her daughter that easily. With all the over the top dialog it seemed like something a teenage boy would write.

I have watched that movie so many times and I could almost say the words before I read them. Sad Jasmine you work is always orginal is this a case of writers block

What a hot story and yes i'd like to read more about Mom Fran and who knos else.

One concern i have is the comment that your story is "stolen" from some where......................

OZ Day 2023

Yes more, Fran and mom also mom and Ashley’s boyfriend

Delightfully written very hot. Let's see if Frans available.

To comment 24-ish.

In the opening credits, I recognize what inspired the story as it has one of my favourite moments in porn.

Feel it’s unfair to criticize me on that if you don’t read the actual comments that open the story.

Jasmine

Continue please!

Stolen from someone else or not, this story is FUCKING Hot !

Women know what women enjoy and this story tells what they like.

Too bad guys can't let go like that !

I love the concept.

I would have preferred a bit less dialog, which tended to get a bit repetitious, and more detailed descriptions. Did her mother's breasts have big or small aureoles? Were they pink or brown? Did she nurse Ashley when she was an infant? If so, a few remarks about "returning to the teat" would have been erotic. Most of all, I was waiting for a surprise ending -- e.g., the boyfriend comes over, rings the bell, is not heard, and lets himself in. A whole new level of erotic complication when he shows up in the bedroom, hungry cock in hand.

Continue please!

https://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php?viewkey=ph61f5dab1ccb13

Thought I’d heard it before

As it's already been said, premise and some dialogue lifted from Girlsway.

I honestly expected more from you. Even if this wasn't stolen it's not even close to your usual standard.

Yes please.

yes I would like to hear more!

Please continue this story

I do hope your life is as beautiful as your words.

Smoking hot. What does Fran have in store?

This was an incredibly hot hot story! I need more!

It needs to continue and entertain all the girls

Fran AND Fran's Moom!

Please add chapter 2, 3, and/or 4 or more. This story has so many possibilities. LOVED LOVED LOVED IT!

Yes more please and Ashley never did get fucked by her mommy with the strap on.

Yes I would like to read more of this story. It is very good like all your stories SSL.

Oh Yes Please.

I bet you have the Fran story already in the can!!

Very erotic

For you an automatic 5 stars and yes, please tell us more about what happens later that night and all of the days to come.

Yes!!

Please continue with your story!

The 1st part was fantastic!

+1 for the Fran cums over and then more as the rest of the girls cum over.

Daughter needs to bring home a creampie for Mommy

Too rushed, mommy talk is okay but this story way too many "mommy". Score: 3.

Part 2 please, but with fran's mom not fran

Can't wait for part 2 and more

This whole premise is stolen from girlsway.

Ariana Marie and Eva Addams

Even included the ‘you need a fuck buddy comment’

Pretty fucking greasy to try and pass it as original

Fran and later her Mommy for a Mommy / Mommy duo, then a daughter Mommy swap with the four of them, line those Mommies up and fuck them doggy style

Yes, please, more!

Yes, please, more!

DAMN.. YES..!!

I surely enjoyed reading this.. and wanted to even try it for myself as well..!! Please.. let me give it a try and enjoying it until the end,..!!

JIM..!!

Definitely need more!!

Ashley needs ro bring home a cream pie for Mommy

More please

Another great story. Can't wait for Fran to come over and we could have another great story. Maybe this will lead to a series if Frans mother joins the party.

Wonderful---how about Fran and her mom showing up!

Hi I would love to know what happens next.

I have been reading you stories for the last two years and love all your adventures.

Love to see what happens next!

After the rigorous fuck session she just gets dressed and goes on a date?