by Egmont Grigor
please continue the story. Its not filled with hot sex, but that's fine with me. The characters are interesting.
so far so good. Nice potential to become a real topper. G.Belgium
Horrible writing. Please -- spell checking and basic proof reading would really improve this story.
This is a good story worth fixing.
Oh, yeah, the parents, who scorned the gutter slut. I need a bleach my eyeballs after reading this clap trap.