All Comments on 'Mommy Was a Whore'

by Egmont Grigor

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Just horrible. That’s it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good grief, is there anyone to like in this cluster fuck?

Oh, yeah, the parents, who scorned the gutter slut. I need a bleach my eyeballs after reading this clap trap.

KentishKentishalmost 16 years ago
different

keep going, this could be a good tale.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Good story

Horrible writing. Please -- spell checking and basic proof reading would really improve this story.

This is a good story worth fixing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
nice potential

so far so good. Nice potential to become a real topper. G.Belgium

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
liked it

please continue the story. Its not filled with hot sex, but that's fine with me. The characters are interesting.

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