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Click here"Those doctors did tell Mom to be very supportive of your condition," Kaylee said knowingly.
Yeah...the doctors." Ben had no idea what his sister was referring to, but he went with it.
Kaylee was shaken with a confused arousal. Her brother's story was shocking, but it was also shockingly erotic as well. "I totally get you not telling me right away. I definitely have more questions about your arrangement with Mom...but they'll have to wait until after you fuck me again."
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Author's Comments:
For people that've followed me since the beginning, I hope this recent installment was worth the wait! This story has more left in the tank (at least 2 more chapters), but I can't tell you when that'll happen as I battled writer's block with this past one...but I already have a really cool idea for Ch. 06. There's a good chance I do a one-off story of a different genre before I return to this series though.
A potential issue with the climax of Ch. 04 is that it may not line up with things Kristin has been saying since Ch. 03. As it turned out, it didn't even take 24 hours of Kaylee being home to fuck her brother...I decided against doing a 1-2 week time jump that would've took place half-way through this chapter. My explanation was that Kristin underestimated the mind-altering component of the drug. She's also affected by it, so she doesn't fully grasp the fact that loss of inhibition is an immediate side effect. Kristin correlates that to her divorce from Ben's father...but that's just not true.
Comments are always appreciated. I would feel honored if you decide to give me a 5-star rating!
- COMMENTS
trdferg3 months agoAuthor@JMoney66 I actually agree with a lot of your points. I have a different take on writing than I had a few years ago. In 2024, it’s kind of hard for me to re-read this series. I kind of cringe at some choices I made, a couple of what you cited.
The prequel was to correct a fundamental problem I had with the story (zero build up). But I definitely disappointed some fans of this series by calling it chapter 5. I may put in a request to the mods to get that installment renamed
JMoney663 months agoOk, Let me first start by saying I really enjoyed your story. (Mostly.) I say mostly because it was good right up to the PREQUEL. To me the prequel was absolutely unnecessary, and for me killed the vibe. Another part that bothered a little, was the sisters transformation from normal shy college girl who was self conscious of her looks before college then became even more so after her growth spurt, then after being slipped the drug, within 24hr turned into a complete unihibitated nympho-slut, to me the sister becoming a nympho-slut could have been stretched out a little more in order to build on the characters transformation, sex with her brother was to quick to happen, it should have taken a little longer. Now I’m not saying it couldn’t have happened the way you wrote it, because drugs have different effects on different people, but to me it would have been more engaging for the drug to have taken a more slow burn, before turning into a raging inferno. Sadly once the siblings had sex that was it, you jumped into the prequeal, You need to get back to them and then bring the mother into the fold. After reading some of the other comments, if I may make a sugestion, Please for now leave pregnacy out of the story, I don’t understand some peoples obsession with his subject is. Let your chracter enjoy engaging in their illicit sexuality, eventually the drugs effect will wear off but by that time their thought process would make incest for them normal and completely exceptable, and there desires for each other stronger. It’s the way of nature. Anyways I could probable go on somemore but will stop here. You are a good writer and I hope to see more stoies by you, You keep writing and people will keep enjoying your work.
MaxOgdenabout 1 year agoWow. What a hot story. The tropes that typify the genre are there, which i love but I know some people tire of them. But its with how the author handled them. I've never read a story here in which the instigator was so consistently aggressive. That hits so many key spots that make the genre so erotic. The story is fast paced without sacrificing context or character development.
Really, a perfect erotic story. 5 stars from me. Keep them coming!
Anonymousover 1 year agoAbsolutely sucking fucking wonderful. I absolutely adore Cunt in every way and the more I get the more I want, incest sex it’s the best, after reading this I am going to fuck my brains out with two of my sisters, they read this too and their cunts are dripping, so I can get drunk on cunt nectar as well as being drunk with fuck lust. Cunt crazed fucker, Lancashire, UK.
trdfergover 4 years agoAuthorAnd I'm pretty sure that Literotca is publishing it tomorrow (says "NEW" under it right now). I can't say I'm 100% sure this will be the case though...because the fucking thing keeps popping in and out of my drafts folder. Might just be a website glitch. But yeah guys...I'm back!
