by JuliusIncestus
But wait! There's more!... right? I was just cranking up and got dumped out on the sidewalk like some used up trashy hosebag begging for more! More 15" cocks! More impossibly byootiful mamas! More! More! More!
I hope we get to know sooner than later if she gets torn asunder by her plundering son! Will he bottom out or will the last 3" of his cock be forever dry, on the outside looking in with its monstrous Cyclops of an eye?! Inquiring minds want to know! This man-whore certainly does want to know!
So we wait. We wait and hope you don't leave us hanging for too too long. Bang up stuff! Thanks for writing!
Great start. Can't wait to see where this leads. Would like to see them grow closer. I know the aunt will get involved, but I wouldn't introduce another male. Just my two cents there.
Not bad for a start. Suspended disbelief in important in incest porn. The surrounding anecdotes have to be based on being real. I know it’s nit picking but when I had my bankruptcy, I was specifically told by the judge that I could not file for another bankruptcy for 7 years. At 19 yo, I can see going flat broke a couple times, but your mention of two bankruptcies just stood out to me…. When you bring other topics into play, you need to research them a little bit more. I’ll look for more of your works in the future.
You must do another chapter or more. This is a great story. We need to hear about their business gig and how it affects their personal life. You could then bring the Aunt in. So many ways to go.
Wonderful story, I am wondering if there will be several follow ups to make this a series........():\
Loved it but no sex just a BJ !!! Do hope you continue this will make a good series 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This was a well wrtten, plausible story until a ridiculous size penis was introducted into the story.
Like all good writers knows that this story isn't finish and you just barely got started.
Please tell me that you are going finish this story ?
Good story premise. Hope this is the first of many chapters. Eventually the onlyfans need to know its truly a mother-son show. The only negative is the giant cock descriptions, his joystick, etc. Not every hero must have a cock to his knees and not every heroine needs 38DD tits. Fine tuning your otherwise fine writing will make a good story even better.
Where is the rest of the story? Slut Mom is not erotic and the reluctant son thing was way overdone on this one.
It was a great story I guess i expected more with the sister mentioned. I feel there is a lot more that could have been done. I am not a writer so I would hate to say there should have been more.
Great Story. There's that huge cock again. Too drawn out to not have some fucking before the end. Fucking would have given you a 5 instead of a 4.
I know you have four stories left open perhaps if you concentrate on one and finish it before starting on another apart from that riveting exciting cannot wait for the next chapter I gave you a five💋💋