All Comments on 'Moms and Two Sons'

Sorry, you lost me on page 1. No continuity.Like you skipped a chapter. In just a few sentences Bob went from entering a room to his mom showing her bare ass and he was magically naked. A few sentences later he is in the shower after his "supposed" first encounter with mom,and talking about their afternoon fucks. :(

Interesting narration. Well written and edited (something a lot of authors fail to accomplish). Five stars and hopefully a sequel is in the offering.

Rude and crude.............. 2 stars

The story lost me with the extra emphasis on pissing and shitting (wiping the cat's butt, mom listening to him taking a leak, checking his shit afterwards, etc). Sorry. Not my thing. I wish you had mentioned that emphasis in your author's note at the beginning.

Must have been some other story. For example, the weird paragraph breaks in the middle of sentences.

... from the first page. I think you are more into kinky stuff than incest. Nothing wrong with that but not for this category. *

Great,very descriptive m/s sex!! Would love to see the hot milfs in a foursome. The illustrated version would be hot too. Bring in some other congregants. Nothing hotter than a librarian type or hot church lady that is a smoldering hot woman underneath.

I keep going back to this hot story time and again. The 69 scene between Mrs Orsini and son reminds one of the similar scene in Taboo. Hot! Would love to read about these two hot milfs licking each other while getting it dog-style from their sons. Sounds like there are some other church members whose stories might be worth reading. Can't wait for the next episode! Plenty of potential here.

STILL WAITING FOR A FOLLOWUP. HOT!! WOULD STILL LOVE TO HEAR ABOUT SOME INCESTUOUS TRYSTS WITHIN THE CHURCH. PLEASE CONTINUE!