All Comments on 'Mom's Anniversary'

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Prequel?

Well done for the 750 word challenge. Hot, descriptive, and full of feeling and dirty talk. Well done!

I would like for once to read a story where the cheated upon husband to expose and destroy to ungrateful slut & child. This is pathetic.

Nice. Short and hot.

What a mess hated it mother is a whore cheating on her husband with her son! And not much information to boot!

It's a fantasy, erotic written story, get over it LonesomeBoy, if it's not what you like, write your own.

Well, that was totally disgusting, on a number of levels. Let's see, a husband that appears to care for his wife, takes her out for a nice anniversary dinner. We have a son that has zero respect for the man that raised him. We have a 'wife' (that's really just a willing cum dumpster) who cucks her husband, goes out on a date for her anniversary, with sloppy seconds waiting for her husband, if the poor bastard even gets laid later, and just doesn't give a shit about anything but being a slut. just a bunch of horse shit, crammed into a 750 oz bag.

hint: possessive forms of words usually have apostrophes every time. You write both son's and sons, used the same way, in the same paragraph. Only one of them is correct. Can you guess which?

to short...

Short and to the point. Would like a prequel or sequel telling how their relationship has moved on from just fucking to an actual relationship while he goes to college. How his mother is coping with the fact that she wants more from her son.

I would like to address the people who post comments Anonymously. Either don't comment or keep them to yourself. No one likes to hear your bad comments and if you can do better than write your own stories.

You need to spread out use different words to meet the 750 words still basically you need more detail how did start between the 2 why did start who seduced who it's not that hard to put in a short detail and still meet your total it's common sense some may like stories that goes straight into the sex but most wanna see at least a little detail involved in the story

Great for just your 5th story! Ignore the naysayers who can't write a story but are good at criticizing.

Hopefully for the son that the sprem he put in to his mother and she's still ovulating maybe she'll end up pregnant and the father will thinks it's his

If Quinn wants to impregnate Clarissa, then their relationship should ideally be step-mother/step-son.

In real life, most women would have had a hysterectomy when their son was 18+, making a pregnancy impossible. A young stepmother, who wants an own child, may be the perfect set-up.

But then, it wouldn't be true Incest.

Well done none-the-less, 5* and favorite.

Honestly this needs another chapter to finish it you need to do part of it as a prelouge basically giving some information on how it started and why then pick up to the current time and say if he got her pregnant does the husband find out what was his reaction and does the son become the new man of the house does he claim his kid if he got her pregnant or does turn into a pussy and don't claim the kid there's more to be told that should have been in this chapter instead of leaving it unfinished in a wham bam thank you mam way like this was