All Comments on 'Mom's Halloween Costume Ch. 05'

story is getting better all the time!!! thanks

THIS SHOULD BE A MOVIE, I LIKE IT. NOW YOU HAVE ALL WHO READS THIS IN YOUR POCKET. PLEASE DONE TAKE TOO LONG FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. I LIKE THE WAY IT'S COMING TOGETHER. AND MOM A REAL GENIE , BUT SHE READS FROM A BOOK AND NOT WIGGLING HE NOSE. GOOD READ KEEP IT UP.SEE YOU NEXT YEAR JACK. OR SOONER. A FAN.....LAROC OF AGES

very intriguing tale you have please continue it

please make the son impregnate his mom, aunt and grandmother ... well that will be a story of ultimate incest ....

Please continue writing this story my mom and I are enjoying this story so much, she sucks me after reading each chapter and now she fucks me too as she is sooo horny from reading it

I love this story, I am eager to read more

No, Laroc, Genie crossed her arms and blinked, it was Samantha the WITCH who wiggled her nose. Looks like Freddy's grandma is a witch too, reading spells from her spell book.

You can't stop now DaddyJack, you have to post chapter 5!

You can NOT stop.

You have to continue this story.

Don't leave your readers hanging please write the rest of the story

Well guys, I think this is another one of those. Get everybody into the story and anxious to read the next chapter and then................................

Three years and nothing more? The muse must have left you. Or you ran away with her to some secluded island somewhere.

COME BACK, JACK!!!

Chapter 1 was really the only chapter I liked a lot! Then the story just kind of faded for me, but I liked finding out that Deb and Sally's father was Freddy's dad. But hey, I like your work! Keep it up my friend!

Great story, loved the connectedness of it all. I wish there were another chapter or two!

Where are the rest of the stories? You can't just stop there. If this was to be an erotic novela, continue. I did not see the name of the stories saying "What if ..."

Need more. MUST HAVE MORE!!!

But, what about the ending? I was so into the whole storyline & then it ended with so many questions unanswered.

Continue the story where the son comes to check on mom and aunt...

Finally hit the dump line. d/d is an auto 1 star which = .000001 star. now go back vote 1 on each chapter. I hate d/d and I get to vote...

I hate d/d too. 1 star

Okay, it's been almost 10 years now... Won't you at least throw us a bone here and give up the ending?

Please?

For what it is...a dangling storyline

11/10 so far...

Although this story was written 13 years ago, I would thoroughly enjy seeing the author return and finish it.

I HATE a story that has no ending

Come on! You need to finish this cliffhanger!

Aaannnnddddd.... You lost me¿¡

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I would love to find out what the sister could have sex with sex and with aunt or what ???????