All Comments on 'Mom's Halloween Costume Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I would love to find out what the sister could have sex with sex and with aunt or what ???????

oksideshow859419oksideshow8594197 months ago

Aaannnnddddd.... You lost me¿¡

🙉🙈🙊

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Come on! You need to finish this cliffhanger!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I HATE a story that has no ending

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aabout 1 year ago

Although this story was written 13 years ago, I would thoroughly enjy seeing the author return and finish it.

SatyrDickSatyrDickabout 2 years ago

For what it is...a dangling storyline

11/10 so far...

greasedsilvergreasedsilverabout 2 years ago

Okay, it's been almost 10 years now... Won't you at least throw us a bone here and give up the ending?

Please?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
dumped

I hate d/d too. 1 star

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
OK

Finally hit the dump line. d/d is an auto 1 star which = .000001 star. now go back vote 1 on each chapter. I hate d/d and I get to vote...

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Continue the story where the son comes to check on mom and aunt...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Exciting

But, what about the ending? I was so into the whole storyline & then it ended with so many questions unanswered.

NewFreedomNewFreedomabout 8 years ago
WHAT THE HELL???

Where are the rest of the stories? You can't just stop there. If this was to be an erotic novela, continue. I did not see the name of the stories saying "What if ..."

Need more. MUST HAVE MORE!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Sweet!

Great story, loved the connectedness of it all. I wish there were another chapter or two!

SilhouettedNightmareSilhouettedNightmareabout 9 years ago
SOOO....mom was a ghost living inside them?

Chapter 1 was really the only chapter I liked a lot! Then the story just kind of faded for me, but I liked finding out that Deb and Sally's father was Freddy's dad. But hey, I like your work! Keep it up my friend!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Did the muse leave you?

Three years and nothing more? The muse must have left you. Or you ran away with her to some secluded island somewhere.

COME BACK, JACK!!!

gondaolgondaolalmost 10 years ago
2014-2012= 2 years

Well guys, I think this is another one of those. Get everybody into the story and anxious to read the next chapter and then................................

BigDog251BigDog251over 10 years ago
more please

Don't leave your readers hanging please write the rest of the story

jimmigeejimmigeeover 10 years ago
Excellent

You can NOT stop.

You have to continue this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
wow

No, Laroc, Genie crossed her arms and blinked, it was Samantha the WITCH who wiggled her nose. Looks like Freddy's grandma is a witch too, reading spells from her spell book.

You can't stop now DaddyJack, you have to post chapter 5!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
big story

I love this story, I am eager to read more

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Please continue

Please continue writing this story my mom and I are enjoying this story so much, she sucks me after reading each chapter and now she fucks me too as she is sooo horny from reading it

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

please make the son impregnate his mom, aunt and grandmother ... well that will be a story of ultimate incest ....

kaidmankaidmanover 11 years ago
dam

very intriguing tale you have please continue it

LAROCLAROCover 11 years ago
ARE WE IN THE TWILIGHT ZONE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THIS SHOULD BE A MOVIE, I LIKE IT. NOW YOU HAVE ALL WHO READS THIS IN YOUR POCKET. PLEASE DONE TAKE TOO LONG FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. I LIKE THE WAY IT'S COMING TOGETHER. AND MOM A REAL GENIE , BUT SHE READS FROM A BOOK AND NOT WIGGLING HE NOSE. GOOD READ KEEP IT UP.SEE YOU NEXT YEAR JACK. OR SOONER. A FAN.....LAROC OF AGES

asslvr62asslvr62over 11 years ago
awesome

story is getting better all the time!!! thanks

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