All Comments on 'Mom's Halloween Party'

Looking forward to how this continues

its was very nice i hope it carries on Looking forward to how this continues

I would love to see how this continues

The story was great!..... until the end. It felt like you might have hit save too soon and didn’t get the whole story uploaded. Fix the ending and my rating goes up to 5 stars!

Looking forward to the continuation of this delightful story.

I enjoyed this a lot but it did feel like the beginning of a much longer story. I did think it rather unlikely that her mother wouldn't recognise her, notwithstanding the weight loss and disguise, but I certainly didn't let that worry me. Please continue this soon!

Oh, by the way, Eric Clapton didn't cover Wonderful Tonight, he wrote it!

Thoroughly enjoyed this story. Was waiting for the reveal and drama that would follow from it and how it would.be resolved but you left us all hanging..... Not a bad thing!

надеемся на продолжение.

creative interesting story, hope will be continued

Is there going to be the aftermath? or part tow

I’m usually not into mother/daughter stories but this was really great! I hope you continue this story. Would love to read more. Thank you.

quiet is not making any noise

quite is like completely, wholly, or entirely:

quite the reverse; not quite finished.

This is just an observation and stumbling over the quiet part lol

Great story.

You should continue it