All Comments on 'Moms mistake leads to an agreement'

Could have been a 4 but it is only a 2 for the grammar...

It had a nice slow burn in the first part with the rules and such, but then you switched styles to a quick jerk off story. I’d suggest a re-write and post it again as a slower burn style. Slower pace.

I liked it, lots of room for more fun hooe we get more chapters.

To quick and needs details

Amazing when love and sex over come forbidden notions.

Another valiant attempt at producing the worst submission on Literotica, but you're just not quite the worst yet. I have faith in you though. I'm sure with your utter lack of knowledge of verb tense, punctuation, grammar, and capitalization you'll be able to put just a little more effort in and achieve the pinnacle of bad writing. Maybe if you ignored EVERYTHING your word processor tells you instead of everything except spelling, you'll reach your goal.

If that's not your goal, you should just stop hitting that "Submit" button.

Love this kind of story; infused with the tension between mother and son, we know we shouldn’t, but we both know we’re going to…This is a quick read that could have been stretched out to really create that charged atmosphere. Hot story!

A good start to hopefully a longer story!

Don’t make us wait!

5 Stars. Part two please!

Nice!

loved the story keep going.

everyone is a critic especially when its anonymous

HOT!!!!!!!!!!

Dad should just fuck his car in the next chapter if you continue with this. I have a classic car and if one of my kids or grandkids ever drop something on it , yes I would be made but not to toss them out of the house. A dent and scratches can be fixed 🤦🏼‍♂️

3 ⭐️ here

Pls more chapters and more pages

Please continue this story

Hafta agree with cageysea and anonymous re the grammar & punctuation. Otherwise, a fun enough short tale.

The contraction of 'you are' is you're! Rotten spelling.

If he puts that much emphasis on the car he's already cheating or just a fucking asshole

The paint can get scratched but the body (fiberglass) on a Corvette doesn't dent but rather cracks or splits. Only one metal corvette, a prototype, was ever built, the '63 Corvette Rondine.

VERY VERY GOOD...AL

Expanded climax would be cool.

ch 2 dad tell son to stay , pay car , half school and mom becomes son slut

Love Hot Mom stories! 🔥🔥🔥

This needs chapter 2!

more please

This story has potential. You eneded too short. If you need help with the other chapters reachout. I will help you.

Good story but I'm still pissed about what they did to the 'Vette . . . .

Good story. Vettes are fiberglass. Probably more of a crack and smashed in as opposed to a dent.

A little too short. I really enjoyed the thought in my head.