by silkstockingslover
This is getting out of hand in all the right ways. I cannot wait to see how this story concludes. But know that I will definitely be enjoying the journey there.
Would love to see you apply your obvious writing talents to characters that aren't centered around some massive skank, the town bicycle, willing to fuck any and all dicks in a 20 mile radius of her at all times. It's really tiresome, even disgusting at times, like in this story. How about normal people, having lives that don't require you to worry their health care coverage might not keep up with all the diseases they're spreading? We get it, you can write about a slut. How about showing us how to write about any other type of female?
I have been waiting for a new "what mom knows" chapter for so long so i gotta ask, when is that coming? :D
I don't often agree with ananomous comments, but here I have to. You have enormous writing talent, but insist on writing about loathsome individuals. I dropped you from my preferred authors list for that and other reasons from stories from awhile ago. Please, go back to what made you so popular. Just my opinion.
Meh 995, and I'm waiting for more of The Turning Contest and others. "You can't always get what you want!" Patience is a virtue. (But, if Patience is a Jasmine character, she surely won't be virtuous!)
Like the rest of the series absolutely fantastic, look forward to the next instalment, and of others.
Your stories never cease to entertain me.
Love the series. The buildup. Your writing talents should make for a great finale! The house of cards f crushing down!
Really love the series so far! I very much hope you continue this series. One request though: please do keep her boys in the picture! I bet they need lots of continuous motivation :D
If I may suggest: maybe the boys manipulate her? In the first chapter there it was mentioned that Stephanie usually was able to manipulate men in the short term. But in the long term, she ends up being the one manipulated.
Maybe she gets suckered into sexting with her boys? Or hey, like the creepy ex, maybe one of her boys thinks it's a good idea to make a sextape with her?
Or maybe, to demonstrate how good sex is, she let's her daughter watch as her boys spitroasts her or take turns on her?
Also, it's interesting how she might juggle or merge all her "masters". She's already gotten caught with Joel; what if Joel catches her with the boys? Or the boys catch her and Joel? Or if the boys somehow learn she was down for a gangbang with strangers?!
Maybe it's nice if Stephanie discovers the porn her son like? It might be hot if, while "teaching" Haley, she expounds on how porn is OK, but ends up seeing something on her sons' porn she hadn't done yet and basically gets cornered and have her boys do it to her (maybe even while the daughter watches!).
Or maybe a wild weekend with her kids, as reward for sticking to their jobs?
Any, all, or even something else altogether would be good. But please do continue this series!
369. I’m not sure this was necessary, but it was interesting. I’m ready to get back to either her sons again or a training of the daughter. It appeared that she really wanted to put out but was scared. Time to get over that!