All Comments on 'Mom's New Job'

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RastanuraRastanuraover 6 years ago
HR

Sounds like the kind of place where you need a good resume.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
HOT

I hope this is going to be an ongoing story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Started Out OK...

...but, as soon as you got to dialogue, the writing just went completely downhill.

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 6 years ago
not bad

it only goes to show you, there is more than one way to pay for the collage of your choice

va45va45over 6 years ago
Start

Good start and opens the door

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good start

Sounding like the girls are going to enjoy their new jobs I hope that you continue

goducks1goducks1over 6 years ago
this is great

i hope you keep it going. i love it. i'm on to chapter 2. But don't forget about Tom and Kenzie. we need more of them too!!!! you're very good at these stories!!!! congrats, and thanks

blackknight314blackknight314about 6 years ago
A good start.

I like the story so far. Lots of ways to go from here. The 'Club' has a lot of different features to delve into.

fran969fran969over 4 years ago
Paid for sex

Seems like the ideal job. As long as you can schedule it with college work and the sex, it should be great. And you might even be able to build up some excess money to invest.. and find out out if there any chances for promotions at you sex job..??

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
I hope there is more?

You write very well! I hope you take it further. Sort of reminds me of an old adult movie called The Naughty Victorians, but less corny!

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