by defanudist
What a ride holy hell. It's perfect. Both of them just cumming shamelessly everywhere make it even better.
Lol that is hilarious. Him rubbing precum on the railing then shooting ropes down the stairs. Do they clean it up or leave it? I was sure he was gonna masturbate his mom 😕. Good story
Ridiculous story, totally lacking credibility. You guys with mummy issues should get some professional help.
Good start. It was over too quick. I hope you keep it going. Keep the mother enthusiastic and inventive - that never goes wrong.
This was a very interesting story - different than most I have read. It is very cool. I enjoyed it. And, I think it's funny that no one is cleaning up anything. Not funny bad, but funny good. PLEASE continue this story, and make the next chapter longer! It is really good and unique!
Very nice story. Even if it was short, it totally works. Keep on writing. Who cares who is in the story or not. I enjoyed the read.
The story is very pleasant, but inconclusive and illogical. Everything happens too quickly, as if the heroes were already at the start. There is no confusion, no doubt, no worries about the changed situation. Although the plot itself is very funny and enjoyable. It would be nice if the author would rewrite this short story in a long format.
This is was so intense and exciting. I loved it.
It's now been more than a year since it was published but I really hope you'll give us a follow up someday.
A very well written story , simply loved it , absolute turn on , gave it the 5 star rating that it deserved .more please .
Great story I hope there chapter 2 and more it's quite interesting approach to your story line hope you continue with this story and make a multi chapter story good development a bit quick on how things escalated but hey life is quite mysterious and thing can develop pretty fast unexpected that how life is well keep that good work hope see a continuous on this story.