by grenefire
Wonderfully done!! Lots of buildup, but not too slow, and a great payoff! I only wish we had a better picture of how the mom looked, before and after she started working out, hair color, etc. I hope there's a sequel!
REALLY well written! Exciting! SO sexy! Good build-up, I enjoyed this so much!
Liked it a lot. Lots of “believable everyday scenarios “ in Moms daily life. Wished the bedroom “ photo shoot” would have lead to a more intense ending, but again first time, developing the relationship between them. Great scene at the “ sex-club”, although I find it a little hard to believe Mom didn’t recognize the girl dancing as her daughter… will chalk it up to the location, & all the other “ pleasant distractions “ going on. Can’t wait to see what happens next. Thanks