by Cockhole
Thank you, Cockhole. I really enjoyed this story. I have a soft spot for mothers swallowing huge loads of their son's cum, so thank you not only for that, but for going the extra step and describing that part of the story in detail. So many authors gloss over it. Very well written, too.
Very well done! I hope you'll follow this up with more! Thank you!
Thanks, we need more mother and adult son stories.This is a good story..
I enjoy all of your work. To 2nd a prior comment, this one could have the legs for more chapters.
Very good. Incest is not for everyone, obviously, but there are clear exceptions and when those exceptions are present the word "incest" loses its bad reputation. You did a good job of having her overcoming her objections and letting her desire take over. Her reward is mind blowing sex with someone she loves. What is wrong with that? Not so scary after all, is it. Once again you illustrate that fear is the enemy. Overcome that and the sky's the limit.
... Connie and Nick could and should continue, the "treatment" portion of the story is over, so perhaps it could continue with a new title. Nick is home for summer vacation so it can continue around that. We know very little about Allan beyond that he's a cheater and that he and Connie intend to divorce eventually. If there is a desire for something more confrontational you could have Nick overhear his dad planning something to shady to improve his post-divorce lifestyle. There are many directions this could go if the desire is there
You should have stopped after chapter 1. This was simply predictable crap. 2 stars is too generous.
To the idiot that said it was crap, then why read it, why leave nasty comments, its obvious your no writer n just a left handed reader with a right hand wanking off.
To the auther, very good n take no notice of the ignorant tosser
A continuation should be made and include dumping the cheating husband. It would be nice if they could continue with their sexual relationship and live happily ever after. 5 Stars plus!
I loved the progression of this story.. This loving mom becomes her son's lover, delicious. I loved how mom and son hump each other's brains out, all over the house from the dining room to the shower, from the living room to the marital bed. The intensity of the young son thrusting his manhood into his own mothers warm welcoming womb is summed up in that the marital bed is banging on the wall so hard. The mother in this story is so consumed with lust that she allows her son to defile her marital bed and fill her fertile womb with his potent seed. I know this is supposed to be the end but in my mind mommy will become pregnant with her son's love child and each day the two will make love with greater frequency as both mother and son search for their new narcotic high...the incest orgasm.
This is a amazing story would be grateful if you were to continue on with the story 5 stars
No way! How about a chapter where Connie and Nick confront Allan and his lover? In any case, you did a great job.
I just found this story and really enjoyed it. I went back and read all of the stories you've written. You are a great writer. This one and the "checking in" series are among the best stories I've ever read on here. Keep it up please!
would be hot if the mother seduced nicky in bridal wear or some sort of event hope you continue with this
I enjoyed this very much. I'd like to see at least one more chapter to this story regarding mother and son being together after husband and wife get divorced.
Love Literotica and have enjoyed many of the stories. Just had to write to say this was just perfect. Well done cockhole. My wife and I loved it.
Re-edit, re-write, do whatever but finish this. You were/are on a roll.
I thought I was him. I know mom's from my youth that were very similar, minus the sex. Great job, hope they move in together and there's more adventure's
I loved the tension of this story. You have talent, I would love to read more about Connie and her son. At her age she was pretty safe from pregnancy and with her husband suspected of cheating, maybe the powers that be give her a grand child from her son. keep up the good work
Hot hot story, love to read more of these two as they become a couple.
Yes an excellent story !! Has the right atmosphere, flirting, making out, raw sexual excitement and just plain old horniness ... The movie part was great as was the talking between them right into hard sex. I sure hope another chapter or two is in store. It seems like the husband is doing the same thing with his clients and that puts Nicky and his Mom on the same playing field. I'd like to see his Mom take charge in the bedroom and show him how its done. Bang him several times to test his limits and milk him dry. Thank you.
As Tony the Tiger sy's, "G-G-GREAT." hope more is on the way.
I loved it. In my opinion, it would have been better with more sex and more dirty talk. Chapter three, please.
It has been a long time since I had found an interesting mom-son story in literotica.
Same ' divoced/widow mom' stuff kept on pumping... I was kind of fed up. At last came in this story!!!!thanks a lot mate...
I loved the story, but once his cock was healed they went straight to fucking. The 'love' was there but it was slam bam thank you mother.
She needed to take that youngster and teach him how to make love to her whole body. Teach him how to eat pussy, how slow fucking just maximizes the climaxes. In my experience making her come with my mouth and fingers a couple of times before I pounded her pussy and filled her with my cumm was the best part of the sex.
Great series - part 1 was the best with descriptive interaction and part 2 was more mechanical, though the feelings were certainly brought to the story! A followup would be even better! Thank you for the mental picture and stimulation! HOT
This is such a nice story, I need to read about Mom and Son moving in together and living as a couple. Kisses and hugs for the images.
Nice take on an old theme. Great build. Had me hard all the way from beginning to end. Would love to see you take this to the next step, but don't overdo it. Keep it between them in different locations, on vacation, her visiting him in his college dorm. You're a pretty good writer. Mother / Son incest interests me the most. Don't like violence or interracial sex at all. Anal would be a good add, but don't overdo it. Look forward to more.
A wonderful, erotic tale. I found myself wondering if this person writes professionally? Perfect grammar, spelling, punctuation. Pretty sure someone actually read what they dictated before submitting for publication, rather than relying on voice to text without careful proofreading.
For many reasons, a great read.
Yes this was a fantastic story of a loving mother and son, once I started to read I couldn't stop 10/10 Thank You...
Hot until they fucked and he never fingered her or went down on her in before that or while in bed. And in bed the fucking felt rushed. I thought the story was about her need for his big cock and all that cum she loved. So I felt let down that her feelings and the slow build up weren’t the real focus. That said, it was super hot when she looked him in the eye when she used the word ‘cock’ for the first time and that handjob to feed herself part was awesome!! Thx
5 stars. Very good. No mistakes that I noticed which is a rarity on this site well done
great story,ilove the slow build up,and then when they did get to fuck each other
LIE and LAY,,,please learn the difference,,,not thrilled with the ending but a fun erotic read just the same,,liked it.. cant imagine it with my mother,,shivers!! but love the premise!