All Comments on 'Mona's Daughter'

by LeCoach

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mBrowmBrowover 11 years ago
POV confused me

Points of View seemed to change, different narrators, different genders, left me confused, so I gave up.

mBrowmBrowover 11 years ago
OK, engaging story!

So I tried to scan through too fast, must admit. And thanks for writing!

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I began writing erotic stories in my early teens. I feel this is my calling. I try to write stories that are at least somewhat believable. I love women and don't like to see them victimized or brutalized. Yes, there are some typos and other mistakes in my stories. I'm not...