All Comments on 'Monica from Apartment 37'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Funny!

LOL really! Erotic humour, loved it.

Tight, witty dialogue, amusing characters, crude oafishness, subtle hints ...

Congrats, a tour de force!!

McMahonSMcMahonSover 4 years ago
Too short

Gave only three stars as agree with he guideline comment for that award: "Keep writing"!!! This cries out for further development now all the characters have been introduced.

chytownchytownabout 1 year ago

***Thanks for the read. Is there more to come???

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