All Comments on 'Monica, Simon and Katie Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very nice. Please continue this wonderful story. ❤❤❤❤❤

1whiskey1whiskeyover 2 years ago

hope there is going to be part 2

silveraidersilveraiderover 2 years ago

Great start. Loved the slow (and hopefully more to come) build-up and the dialogue is just right too. So rare on Literotica. I thought the use of the word 'junk' (didn't feel right between a loving couple) and 'bottom bits' (too prudish) jarred a little, but they are easy to replace with words that don't feel out of place. Looking forward to part two. Thank you.

maneater82maneater82over 2 years ago

Looking forward to part 2..

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I'll be waiting for part two. Very well done!!!!

txskipper597txskipper597over 2 years ago

easy to follow and want to continue.

Wiz1002Wiz1002over 2 years ago

Great opening chapter

Very well written story that sets the scene for some sexy sapphic loving between Katie and Monica. I’m pleased that Simon is aware of what us going on, encourages the sex and is also getting a benefit!

Love to read Ch2

JackE69JackE69over 2 years ago

Would love to know what happens next :) details

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

really beautiful... I need more of this ;-)

pussyeater2256pussyeater2256over 2 years ago

good progression. Sounds like fr real. Is there going to be a sequel?

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