by Dana_221
Great start. Loved the slow (and hopefully more to come) build-up and the dialogue is just right too. So rare on Literotica. I thought the use of the word 'junk' (didn't feel right between a loving couple) and 'bottom bits' (too prudish) jarred a little, but they are easy to replace with words that don't feel out of place. Looking forward to part two. Thank you.
Great opening chapter
Very well written story that sets the scene for some sexy sapphic loving between Katie and Monica. I’m pleased that Simon is aware of what us going on, encourages the sex and is also getting a benefit!
Love to read Ch2