All Comments on 'Monogamish - The Bachelor Party'

You claim it’s not realism, but here you are, sending everybody to Vegas and they all lose money :-)

Over under on marriage? 1.5 years.

Fuuuuuuuck... can't wait for Nola!

An exhuberant and fun story! Would have like to be in that wedding party - as long as it was before my own.

I don't care where it's going, I just want to come along for the ride! It will be an interesting universe as it fills out.

This qualifies as a Public Service Announcement if the up & coming young men who read it learn how important generosity and care for the needs of one's partner are of paramount importance.

Another 5-star offering.

Good story. Picky, unimportant detail unless someone actually wanted to do this sort of thing: prostitution is NOT LEGAL in Las Vegas (or Reno.) It is legal in several counties in Nevada.

The “go ahead and fuck other people“ positions of the main characters is, if anything, a bit of a turn off. You are a great writer, and this story is well written, but the plot seems contrived to just have some routine sex thrown in together as a chapter.

Five stars, certainly, but so far out of my experience (and true wish) that the fictional experience was satisfying.