All Comments on 'Monsters in the Mountains Ch. 04'

WHY DID YOU STOP?

Apparently the writer has passed away. No activity at all. R.I.P. Thanks for your stories.

Given that this story was posted in late-May of 2016, I don't think we're getting a chapter 5. Good cliffhanger. 5/5*

Absolutely love this story, can’t wait for more..

Fantastic story. Would be nice to have a conclusion but what us readers have been given was a joy in written form. Thank you very much for sharing this with us. 5 stars

The major changes to the story would have been a daunting task to continue. Perhaps its best left unfinished.

This was an absolute thrill to read! Could hardly put the thing down and it’s ruined my bedtime these past few nights. I’m honestly sad that such a damn good story is unfinished.

Considered recommending this to another bigfoot appreciator by the name of Bob Gymlan on YouTube, but that hardly seems appropriate.

I sure hope Bobalous is doing well. I can’t thank him enough for the wonderful tale he wove for us. It’s easily found top place in my hall of fame and I’ll be sure to reread it often.

Too bad another writer can't finish this off for bobalous. It needs to be finished.

I still believe, but has it end without beating Carter Ashton? Ch.5 and then "Happier Ever After " Ch.6?

Loved the story. Would like to see it finished. Left too much open. But, I see no more from author the last several years. So, I guess I will never get the ending.

Awesome story, hope it doesn't end there.

Good story, but sad it was never finished and apparently abandoned.

I like the story. Hopefully soon it will be finished.

I don't care about the fact the MC is somehow able to do all he does with a Jacked up shoulder and a battered body. Just someone please finish the story

Someone should finish this one!

I only have two complaints with this story:

1) The compressed timeframe is really problematic with any kind of true immersion into the story. It would have been a simple thing to write these chapters taking place over months instead of days/weeks and would make the emotional attachments and bindings more believable. As it stands the real fantasy aspect of this story isnt the Bigfoot, it's the women falling in love and wanting babies within the first month of meeting the MC.

2) Nobody, especially not an employer, can legally tell someone they can't date multiple people and make them drop one of their partners. I understand the author wants conflict regarding the thruple, but that isn't a realistic way to do it.

Other than that, it's an interesting tale and I am eager to see where this goes.

l would like more of this story.

Shame this story was not finished. Hope rhe author in ok.

Just as an FYI to those posting for more of this story. I followed this story years ago when it was first posted and after it was left hanging for a while I remember a post saying the author had passed away. I am not saying it was true but last post was 2016 so it probably was.

Just read the whole story straight thru

Loved the character development,

the story line, the plot twists.!!!

Please, do you think you can do at least

one more. I would love to see where

this goes!!!

Please finish it, or pass it to someone else but it’s your work and I would prefer your ending.

Interesting story until the unfinished ending.

Mike the Irishman 🍀

Wonderful story, really sad it is unfinished, hope you pick it up some time in the future

Wonderful story! Even if you never publish another word of it, I still thank you for sharing what you have.

Loved the story and premise of it. Wish it had more to read of it but assume after 5 yrs that it will not be finished. Hope you are well and that whatever life has thrown at you is not keeping you down...good wishes to you and thank you for your time and hard work.

WHAAAAAATTTT, DON'T YOU DARE DISAPPEAR AFTER. you can't do that to me 🥺 THE SUFFERINGGGGG.

Still waiting for chapter 5, your story is one of the best ever posted on this site. The way you have written it leaves so many different scenarios possible but I really want your take and direction. Thanks

I hate that the story just ends please come back and don’t fall off the face of the earth like many other authors

I really enjoyed your story and would love to read far more about them - - the missing gold could be discovered in the basement of his rebuilt home so they would be able to fight the assholes off !!

Disappointed that the story ended where it did. Left us hanging in a not very pleasant place.

Please continue this story. I, we, really enjoyed it so much. Look at the rating! Top 1 percent!

This story is one of the best and most readable, happy, en captivating, fun, sad, thrill novel I've been happy to read.

You can do it!

Hoping you come back with more.

Great story. Looking for an ending.

It's a shame that the story hasn't continued, I was eally enjoying it. But that's life, people come and people go and you never hear from them again. Sad that it wasn't continued.

Anthony

Its been almost 4 years and not a word.

Just seeing if you are still around I hope so.

Thanks

voyer61

This story needs to continue its brilliant so please come back and finish it so we cans see what happens with everyone

This has been amazing to read. 5 stars is not enough. I only wish there was another to finish the line of stories.

love the story

You should turn this into a book and sell it on Amazon! I would buy a copy for certain.

This is absolutely a wonderful story. I really got into it, all the relationships are amazing.

Such a wonderful series, that may never be finished. I just hope and pray that no tragedy has befallen the author. Another five stars from this reader.

Just keeps getting better, please write more. Was instantly absorbed. Great writing.

Absolutely great story - certainly hope you get the time, at some time, to write more.

I am not creative. I have no idea what it takes to write such engaging, mind stimulating stories? Or how much time it takes?

I, presumably like many others, depend on people with your skills, and generosity to entertain us with your free works

As such I apologise for those of us who provide what I consider to be negative Abusive feedback.

I trust that you can overlook such feedback and continue to share your work as you are able to.

I will keep watch

All the best for your future

CRW

You call him a douchebag. And you should finish 'this shit' yourself?

On top of that, you have the gall to accuse Bobalous of disrespect?

He provides you with a free story, to spark your imagination, and you spew insults when he doesn't continue - without knowing the reason why.

I wonder which character from his story you most resemble ...

I am so tired of this disrespect for their readers by some of the authors. I might just finish this shit myself.

I hope all is well in your life and the family and job is keeping you busy. Hopefully a new chapter will find it's way to us soon. I have enjoyed this story several times and have repeatedly looked into my favs looking up your name to see if a new chapter snuck by me. I will keep looking! Ashton is a jerk and I look forward to see how he is dealt with.

Truly amazing story, I just could not put it down. This was definitely a story that kept me up past my bedtime.

Fantastic story line and great in depth characters. Looking forward to reading more.

I really wish someone would come along and finish this .

I've spent the last couple days bingeing this series and it is already a favorite. I'm excited for future chapters and hope you find the time write them. I read your bio so I know your situation and I'm patient so I can wait but still I hope you get to it soon. Keep up the amazing work!

I've spent the past couple days bingeing this. I seriously cannot wait for more!

I just got done reading your 'Monsters' story and was absolutely amazed at how beautifully it was written.

I understand that real life takes precedence, but wanted to let you know you have a new fan of your writing. A big fan at that. I just wanted to encourage you and say that if you ever need assistance in proof reading once you start writing again - I'd be honored to help. It's really amazing to see a work of fiction like this on this site. In all honesty, I know it was written as erotic fiction, but you could easily change that up and release this as a novel and it would be an amazing mainstream piece!

Can't wait for more of this story... All the best!

Just read your story, very imaginative, descriptive. I can see the characters and landscape in my mind, through your words.Sorry you did not get to finish it. My thoughts and prayers are that you are well. You never know what the future might bring.

I found myself to keep reading all the way to the end. Sexual part of it was great, but the story was so much more. Filled with love, life, relationships and family. Please continue it when you can. I look forward to seeing it through. What a great writer you are. Thanks.

I’ve reread this series several times as it’s so good and I’m really trying to wait patiently for the next instalment, but I completely understand how real life gets in the way

This is one of my favourite series on this site

great story I wish you would write more I am hooked. I have read other stories about bigfoot and it's just sex. this has more a real feel about it.

Hey Bob,

I must admit this, your stories got me hooked onto sci-fi and I keep on checking for any update whatsoever. I understand that it's hard to get free time with the new job and everything, but atleast post another update on your about section in your profile regarding the progress of the next part (not the storyline but the work). I hope you read this someday and update the relevant portion.

Will not give up on you though.

Thanks

This series is amazing. I totally want to see what happens next. Thank you for this story and I hope you can continue someday soon. If you ever want possible directions for the story and characters let me know. Thanks.

I really enjoyed this story and I had a hard time stopping please continue with this story

Thank you for this story

Excited for the next installment. I found myself staying up hours late just to finish reading the story. Thank you for the evening enrichment!

Excellent series! You write well, the storyline is new and refreshing, and this story needs to play out more.

Please continue this story

I sincerely hope you can continue this fantastic story; I grew very involved with all your characters and now that I've finished chapter 4, I am missing them. Please find the time to bring them back if you would. You write very professionally and self edit quite well, I thoroughly enjoyed the time spent reading your surprisingly wonderful tale, you have another fan. Best of luck in the future, and you are an amazing author with a couple saddle bags full of talent!

Just finished rereading your story which I do every once in a while. enjoy it now as much if not more than the first time I read it. Thanks for leaving it here for our enjoyment.

Read all 4 chapters in 2 evenings. The story held my attention the whole way through. I was sorry to see it unfinished for so long but definitely understand the time constraints that life puts on extracurricular activities. For sure I will be saving you as a favorite author and check back occasionally in hopes of seeing new postings

Hope you are enjoying your new environment and family time. Have been checking back at random periods for your updates, am pleased that your move has allowed you more time with your family. Hopefully after the Holidays you can find the time to submit the next chapter before someone try’s to finish it for you.

Wishing you and your family a happy and prosperous 2018!

Munchie184

I finished reading chapters 1-4 prior to Halloween 2016 and Bob's comment was then, "...by Halloween." Well it came and went in 2016 and now its came and went in 2017. Now I am wondering if Bob will be the one to complete chapters 5 & 6 or will someone else have to do it for him?

My first grandson is due on October 31st and it would make setting in the waiting room a lot easier if I had Chapter 5 to distract me. Hope all is well and you can post soon, you have many, many fans and we are all looking forward to the next installment.

Read all 4 chapters and was rivited. But you havent posted in months, hope everything's alright. My only hangup in the whole story was the flat noses you discribed..... It through me.... Were you saying their faces are more ape like or like an off shoot of cromags and Neanderthals with more hair most our human like ancestors had protruding noses i was picturing something like a furry cromag and not ape for all the dna we had in common as apes share less dna with us .

What if they stop sending reports,take of the bracelets leaving the bfro blind and as a final report Megan tells then that it is the final report and why. Plus they need to talk to Jim and get him to help with those who do support him to get rid of that snotty nosed spoilt brat that is now in charge. If they try to send some one to take over from Jordan good luck with that as Missy would kill them!

I am riveted to this storyline and hope you get the chance to finish it. Great characters and a compelling story well told.

Come on, put an ending to the story...

Hope all is well and u can update this story soon

Bob

Hoping all is well, but as a new chapter has not yet been published I assume that life is still dumping on you. So sorry. May sound a tad weird on a erotic story site, but I will be adding you and your family to my prayer list. Hope it helps!

I also look forward to when you can finish next installment. An update on status would be appreciated - either here or in your bio. Several readers have stated they believe the series has died.

Thanks for letting us into your little literary world as it has been a joy to read, and good luck.

I'd like more of this story. Thank you.

NOW!!

Sad thing a fine story like this is ended .Also kinda scary ,just hope BOB is ok

This story seriously needs to continue. Great story line. Good character interactions, and a interesting plot line. Look at the ratings! If the author has abandoned this we need to find someone like FTDS to work on it.

i cant wait to read more of this, i love it top marks for you

I know it's hard, but taking care of one's family is first. And I remember my own long commutes, 90 minutes each way. By six months, I was nearly incoherent and had to quit. Some can do that - my sister managed it for years. He's keeping tabs, and if he says he's writing, he'll post when he can.

But just to be clear, Bob, I'm waiting, too. :) Slainté

since the last update. In most cases these means you can stick a fork in him. He is done. He comes off my list of writers to follow.

Got an email from Bob today. He is still limited on time with a new job. He says he has worked in his spare time on a few stories both new and old. He mentioned that with his new limited time, that he is trying to gather a good amount of stories to post on a weekly basis, then he'll start submitting them. He doesn't know when that will start up however. So he's still around, still responds and still working on these stories. Hopefully he'll get Chapter 5 up.

More interesting story nice and waiting for more

Awesome story. Great cliff hanger. And now I wait.

agreed with seadog, too many questions, need more answers asap

This can't be the end ... Where's the gold hidden? Is Jane's baby a boy or a girl? Does Jordan impregnate the other bigfoots? Does the young male Bigfoot join their family. Does Jordan finish his house? Do they fight and win against the BFRO? More, there should be more.

A really entertaining story with the law chapter being as long as Leviticu.

Suffered literary whiplash when ch.4 ended at the crisis if the story and turned the page to find NO CHAPTER 5! Oh well, the common reader's plight is not an easy one.

Very clever work - sort of a cross between LASSIE and DALLAS.

If you are still out there, see if you can rustle up a ch.5.

Just wanted to let those that come around here to view the comments for updates, and those that might feel he has spread his wings and flown off that Bob is still around and working on the next chapter.

Hi! I have been checking in pretty much every week since September for the new chapter. So I was just hoping for an update as to the progress on chapter 5. I know you've probably been asked plenty of times already, but I'd appreciate a response and I'm sure others would be glad for it too. Anyway, really enjoying the story. Been reading it pretty much since it was originally released. Keep up the good work.

Very interesting story-line. I'm looking forward to more.

You are weaving a very intriguing Tale .please continue

Your story has me hooked. Please continue your intriguing tale. I especially want to read the part where the wicked head of the foundation gets his just desserts. Carter Ashton deserves everything he gets. Maybe some of those monsters can get hold of him. It would tickle me to read that they stomp the hell out of him and his political, ass kissing buddies... Maybe they could attack their camp at night.

Let's see, use your gold to pay off the lien on the property, rescue Dr. Stein's reputation, and continue to screw both girls and as many female mountain monsters as you can... Don't forget to ball the Asian pilot. She needs peter, too.

That's okay, you can get it back. You probably are the kind of writer that needs a good chunk of time to write. Several hours to get back into the flow and your creative juices will start to flow again. Open the window, cup of coffee, pack of Marlboro Lights, cup of water and just start writing.

You didn't quite smoking did you?

I have seen it a lot thru the years with people that post these extra long chapters, they seem to burn out quickly. Not sure why a few keep trying it but very few can pull it off. While we all like long chapters, we like the story to continue even more and a third to half the length of this one is fine for the vast majority of us.

Anymore when I see someone doing long chapters I am almost sure they will stop before finishing the story.

You started this Harem, you should finish it.

joke aside, keep up the good work, this is one of the best series i've read so far on the site, so i beg you give us more of this awesome tale.

I have enjoyed this series and have been hoping for more. I hope you are in good health and will have another chapter ready for us soon.

If you plan to finish this story? If you are over writing it a quick note to let us all know to 'give up the proverbial ghost' would be greatly appreciated :) I'm really hoping you continue it... But I gotta admit at this point I'm about out of hope :(

Any indication on whether or when you're going to finish this great story?

"Knock, knock, knock. Bob?" "Knock, knock, knock. Bob?" "Knock, knock, knock. Bob?" As you can tell I'm having issues just like Dr. Sheldon Cooper would over this story. Please please please!!!!! I need more!!!

What happens next your readers really want to know

I truly LOVE this Tale, as implausible as it seems. Can't wait for the next Chapter....well I guess I'll have to since you are the MAN. Please hurry this is such an enjoyable read.