All Comments on 'Monstrous Lovers Ch. 02'

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Good cliffhanger. Someone is going to have to learn about anal orgasms if he wants his junk back - analingus or futa? Looking forward to Ch. 3.

I am really enjoying this story so far. The only criticism I can find is that while I do enjoy the witty banter between our hero and his AI, I have occasionally had a hard time figuring out who was speaking at the time.

I hqve to admit this is decent work. It's hot and the actual story is involved enough to have you keep going. It makes me wonder about a couple of things though. This is a game. Some game in the future that offers full immersion vr. You think you are there. Taste, smell, touch, everthing feels just like real life. Also the ai is so advanced that it least from the readers perspective the npc's might as well be people. So that makes me wonder a few things. How much time is passing in the "real world", how is he eating and going to the bathroom? Since the people he is interacting with seem so real what if he falls in love with a computer program? Does this society he is from have ways to deal with that? Are they ai or is this some sort of mmo? It might be interesting if you could explore those things. Or maybe you prefer to keep this like an isekai type.experience. It does work like that and it is good, it just makes me wonder about what else you can do.

And the characters I just wish all the good stories from the genre didn't involve the guy getting fucked in the ass. I don't know when this started but I wish they would make a gay and a straight version.

Guess he's gonna have to focus all his energy on *giving* during Encounters lol. And/Or avoid Encounters in favor of leveling up via combat instead. (I **REALLY** don't care to see any butt-play on a male character. Plus, that would be a pretty glaring flaw in a curse meant to prevent any debauchery whatsoever.)

He seems to be taking a lot of things a bit too seriously, treating it almost like it's real life instead of just a game.

Also, I second the request for a "How is he playing without logging out for so long?" explanation.

Anyway, a pretty fun story. 5 stars.

Here's to hoping he manages to get his virtual equipment back by the end of the next chapter lol

I hope you continue the story relatively soon.

This story just keeps getting better. Can't wait for the next chapter.

A fun story with an interesting plot, cool setting, fun characters, and well written action. I also love the AI concept and hope to see more of this story! Keep up the good work

For the love of God, and all that is holy, please continue this story!