All Comments on 'Mood Slime Ch. 16'

i really enjoyed this story alot, just one tiny detail sorry if it's a bit nit-picky. a lot of exclamation points i felt like i was almost getting shouted at in the story. otherwise i thought it was so good i cant wait to read more

wait a minute, whatever happened to kate after this? can't seemed to find a follow up chapter

Jeeeez, why so many exclamations? I'm getting sick of the weird shouty narrator's voice, it's messing with my ability to, y'know, enjoy the story. Use periods instead ffs

Dude, these are some of my earliest stories from like 2016