by maestro84
Jeeeez, why so many exclamations? I'm getting sick of the weird shouty narrator's voice, it's messing with my ability to, y'know, enjoy the story. Use periods instead ffs
wait a minute, whatever happened to kate after this? can't seemed to find a follow up chapter
i really enjoyed this story alot, just one tiny detail sorry if it's a bit nit-picky. a lot of exclamation points i felt like i was almost getting shouted at in the story. otherwise i thought it was so good i cant wait to read more