All Comments on 'Moonshadows Ch. 04'

now we can wait another year to find out what happens next.

That creepy ass Cassian is going to continue to stalk her. Selene need to tell Rafe, her instincts is telling her Cassian is trouble. Rafe won't think less of her. Selene would want to know if some female was bothering Rafe in the same manner as Cassian.

FINALLY!!! A NEW CHAPTER! PLEASE UPDATE SOON, LOVELY~!!! <3

You have been missed! Really happy that you've decided to continue the story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Now keep updating! Need Rafe to kick creepy vampire ass!

you so need to continue this. i am loving the story. keep up the terrific writing!!

The almost cinematic depiction is fantastic. .. so easy to immerse in the plot and characters. While I'm male I can easily internalize Selene's feelings and ride her adventure

No No No! Some creepy guy you met at a concert walks into your place of work and starts to make you feel menaced? The LAST thing you should do is brush it off as over reacting. Don't make a huge scene, but call your boyfriend. If it's nothing, its nothing. However, just in case you DO go missing, at least he and the cops have "Hey, I hate to be a bother, but i just got kinda shaken up by this Cassian Grey dude at a table i'm waiting. I know its probably silly, but he approached me at the concert last night and creeped me out then. I know i shouldn't bother you with it, but I felt like calling you. Talk to you later" Women need to trust their instincts more, and considering its a werewolf story (or it sounds like it) You should play up on that. This dude is a creeper, and if she's getting those vibes, she should run for the hills. Selene is smarter than that. Other than that though, i'm loving the story.