All Comments on 'More Than a Cookout'

by lizzybella

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Lizzybella is most likely Johnabella

Just another suck and fuck story

I guess guys jerk of to this stuff. Me? I'm still dry.

Gina

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
With Nobody Commited Or Intended

it was not a foundation but a exploration - the writing will improve if you wish it to. The result of a piece like this is as Gina commented - your question is what am I doing here and why - if it is to learn and grow - I think you need to respect yourself more to do that (better subject matter) otherwise you won't either.

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