All Comments on 'More Than Just a Fairy Tale Ch. 10'

another great chapter... I actually thought that Meg was pregnant. but of course she's not, she would be a great mother and Luc a great father. I'm glad that meg and luc are finally mates. now that luc is hurt how will the next chapter play out... well i just have to wait until next time.

really like the chapter cant wait for more

I had a feeling she could have been pregnant. She's not, so oh well. Now, I'm on the edge of my seat.

Please write the next chapter!

why does that little wolf sound like something big

why do I have a feeling that little wolf is going to end up an important part of their relationship? I'm not even sure she's a normal wolf, she ought to be scared silly by humans.

You make us wait for this chapter, and then leave us hanging! As for Meg not being pregnant, she actually could have had a very early miscarriage since her cramps were so bad. Ah well, there is time enough for everything, assuming Luc survives that is.

This bear's behavior is so atypical that I'm astonished that no one else remarked about it. It's hard to get their attention when they are eating. Just try chasing one out of your camp site when it's discovered your breakfast!

I really liked three pages instead of only one.

Really good liked the long chapter but really a Bear whooped a wereeolfs ass come on man not kool

Still loving it. I agree on the critic upon bear's behaviour, though.

This bugs me even more: as p-pills affect the fertility of the woman and not the man, it shouldn't make a difference wether the man is human or werewolf. If there is no egg ready to be fertilized, it won't matter how fertile the man is.