All Comments on 'Morning Ritual Ch. 01'

Hope there is more to come you can surely take it further

I've read a number of your submissions and find that you are becoming one of my favorite authors. Your stories are always hot and even a little more believable than most of the others--Makes it a lot more fun on this side of the page. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. (And getting hard :-))

Enjoyed the read and looking to catch up with some of your other stories here in a bit.!*

Will be sure to add you to my list of "to read" writers.

Thanks.

In reading is discovering a new favorite writer. RCC is the most promising writer I 've encountered here in a very long time. Her talent reminds me of the great Green Gem, and like GG she gets better with every outing.

I really look forward to enjoying her work as we share her storytelling journey.*****

I loved this story. The sexual energy you created was strong and pleasurable. Another chapter or two seems to be calling. Can you answer the call?

Thanks Don

Loved it, your writing is the best I have encountered on this site. I was able to read it entirely without having to interpret what you meant. Very good, thank you.

Hi everyone, thanks for all the feedback. Got a few anonymous ones that pointed out I may have mixed up names in this one. Sorry about that, this one is all JOHN (not Ben). I'm always thinking about my stories and hope to add to this one and the Mia and Ben stories - hence the mix up. Again, thank you very much for voting, for leaving comments and sending me private messages. I appreciate the feedback so much! - RCC

Your stories are very addictive, look forward to more from a promising author. And even more so from a female author. Very rare on this site.

And you will find a way to keep your charters straight... eventually! I've gotten to the point of having to complete an entire series before posting any of it to keep the charters and story line correct. And it only gets worse when you have multiple stories in the works.

Look forward to more.

Great story, I can't wait for more.

I had some time when I wasn't busy writing. I am obviously spending it reading some of your work.

"That was..." he whispered against my hair.

"Yeah, it was." I whispered back.

I freaking love 'un-said-ness' in things sexual. Loved the inner dialogues/monologue of your character. Great, centered, POV writing.

I enjoy your use of the known Seattle that you obviously love to create a backdrop for a promised but as yet unfulfilled desire. A need not yet known.

You have the start of a great story. Hope to see more soon.

To the author, considering the John / Ben name mix up you might want to use an editor.

Images you created are so vivid! Totally draw the reader in and literally drench them with the details!

There is certainly a need for MORE! You have us hanging in anticipation - please don't disappoint us!

page one the guys name changes from John to Ben and back again, thought she was only meeting one person