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All Comments on 'Morning Service to Master'

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JadestoyJadestoyalmost 7 years ago
Some advice

Get a editor

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Buy a dog

If you feel the need to groom something. UGH!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
editor?

get AN editor

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Nice write up.

Those who only judge the grammar, and not the content and compassion are wastes of skin. Very god read. Thank you for sharing..

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The idea was interesting but the incredibly poor grammar took away all of my interest in the story. You really must use an editor!

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