All Comments on 'Most Memorable Loss of Virginity'

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UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyalmost 5 years ago
Huh

How can the first sentence in a new story say you had told us something before. This is a single page story with no character introduced and definitely no backstory.

Silly start.

csljr1jcsljr1jalmost 5 years agoAuthor
RE: Huh

@UltimateHomeBody - It was an attempt to set the scene without explicitly saying "I had oral sex with the woman before but not yet fucking", but rather implying it as background.

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