by TheInvestigator
There's not a damn thing wrong with this. Go ahead and submit the rest. Don't worry about the sensitive people. This was dope
And I loved it! I get the allure of the slightly darker edge to incest stories. The utter mind fucking that occur from both participants.The reluctantly giving into a messed up passion. You captured it all nicely. More please!
You get 5 stars for me... like a few of your other comments said fuck the sensitive people they don't have to read the rest
I liked every bit of this story. The way it is composed, the descriptiveness and most of all the credibility! This is so fucked up and depraved and yet so much more credible than the vast majority of incest stories.
I particularly liked the description of mother, in “red panties, the top hidden by a slight belly roll”, or as he fucks her hard “her ass rippled, the cellulite dimples undulating” ... hot, hot, hot and realistic! Not the typical 38 year old mother as featured in way too many mom-son incest stories, who has been working out religiously all her life, and looks like 25.
Thank you very much, I already look forward to the next part!
Well written and I appreciated the sex being almost like a form of combat. A lust based story rather than romance based is refreshing in the mother-son genre
Agree with the other commentators who liked it. Very skillfully done. Also, this is quite funny. Very Good!!
Not my normal type of story, but was well crafted. I rated it 5***** for it's realistic take, and how well written it is. Looking forward to reading more.
A different kind of mom and son story. Very hot. Looking for the next chapter.
Reminds me of a tv show from the ‘90s, Profit. It was a dark show about a businessman who had a sexual relationship with his mother. When’s he going to make her jealous? I thought he’d try to pick up another woman in the bar.
Love to be in lock-down with that Mommy. Very good story and worth the 5 stars I gave.
Very real, lots of stories left. The drug use to handle the thoughts was well placed
How long is he gonna voice his reluctance though, other than that I loved it.
I actually loved it, it was very different, i was hoping he was gonna cum inside her by the end, very good read
Love a mom who dress and teases her son love a mom in stilettos heels and blk stocking to make things more interesting.T
Enjoyed it very much. I want to hear more of him taking over and more control. I'm looking forward to him finally cuming in her at least once and maybe even bring that red headed girl he met too really spice things up.
I think it's the first time I read a story in which the son is "forced" to sleep with his mom. I wasn't so sure before reading the story but I was wrong. It is a fantastic story and it's hot all the way through. You better give us the next chapter ASAP because I can' t wait already.
It really does need a sequel its crazy damn hot please don't leave us wanting
God this story was so fucking hot. I wish there were more authors writing about voluptuous mothers, you’re amazing!! I can’t wait to see what you do next.
P.S. I would love to see this story go far enough that he cums inside his mother for the first time in a position where he is in control and could have pulled out
Her huge titties and his 10 inch cock giving her his meat fucking her and cumming all her !! now on to the 2nd part !!
Maybe u could son turn into a mommie's boy...where he would not admit, he cannot do without her pussy now. He was really hooked trying to not let her knowing. He also becomes jealous and makes excuses to visit his mom. He cannot believe he feels this way. Great story by the way!!!!!
Though he/she could've been a more placating. If the son's personality was innocent it would've been dark. But it’s alpha male vs alpha female mostly.
But don’t worry I have some reading material for you. Read some stories by TheTalkMan and the writiers he mentions in his preface(s). Here's the link: https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1236866&page=submissions
I like tits but nothing over a C cup and I like A cups over D cups ALL DAY LONG!!! 10 inch dicks are just stupid. The average vagina is 4 to 6 inches long stretchable a little, so fat chance a 10 inch cock will EVER bottom out. ANY woman in her right mind would never let a 10 inch dick any where near her pussy. IF he rammed it in she would immediately need emergency surgery to repair a ripped apart vagina. THAT IS A FACT!!! The average vagina is designed and perfect for the average dick.
i enjoyed the story and anxious to read more. Dream big!
I hope he gets her ass :-)
meh
poor dad
if that is his family one can only hope the house burns down while these to are inside...