All Comments on 'Mother Accepts Role As Slut'

different for sure , but not bad

Liked it, need to know the whole story - how she got in that position with Mrs. Bell and how her son will continue to use her.

How did she get into this problem? How will her son, now owner, increase that ownership?maybe he can breed her as a surragate, to repay the neighbor, then keep her as a wetnurse/howcow, renting her out for added income. The possibilities as only limited to his imagination

I see nothing but failure here. I think consensual humiliation is a good erotic tool, I saw nothing of thie here.

You gave no indication as to what Mrs Bell had over Paul’s mother which allow Mrs Bell to control her. This wasn’t erotic, it was purely RAPE instigated by Mrs Bell, and the BETRAYAL of his mother by Paul. You thought so little of this woman that you couldn't even give her a name other than slut or mother.

What has you own Mother done to make you hate Mothers so much??

I could see what you wanted to happen, but you failed miserable in setting the right conditions for humiliation of Paul's mother...IMO it could have been a good story...to bad you jumped the gun and shot off prematurely.

One star and reluctantly give at that.

Amanda

Some ideas:

Explain Mrs. Bell's hold on mom.

Son finds a way to submit Mrs. Bell and have full ownership of mom

Does Mrs Bell have any other slaves?

interesting story, kinda hot and sexy though

good story bad spelling errors!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

good story will there be a part 2 soon

Very enjoyable story, I am hoping ythe this story line will continue with his mother, his sisterand the neighbor who provided the slut

Damn , when a story starts out with "Can life cannot get any better than this?" it makes me wonder if I want to spend any more time on it!

You could have said, "Can life get any better than this?"

Or you could start with "Life cannot get any better than this?"

Did you even read your own work? Your sentence hints at your meaning but a hint is not enough, not if you really want to TELL a story.

I know that perfect prose is not the purpose of Literotica but such a glaring error on the first line is a bit much.

I feel we are being drawn into a story without proper preparation. It requires a prequel: how did Paul's mother end up being controlled by her neighbor? It also requires a sequel to tie up the loose ends. I feel this was written by a young person who couldn't wait to get on with the action. I liked what he wrote but, as I wrote above, the story really needs a proper beginning as well as a proper ending.

Wow this story is awesome thus far, I certainly hope you decide to continue.

And next time let him taste her tits. And take his sister i all 3 hols. And let the mom watch. And miss bell to got in too.

Very hott

I would love to see a continuation of this story. Slim chance, I realize that. But I can dream!

Await to see a continuation to this story, pretty good read

There needs to be more, more, more!!!!

Please write part two of this story.

Very nice , more of this story please.

Excellent story premise, but I would have enjoyed her humiliating herself by telling her son how she had come to be "owned" by Mrs. Bell. And maybe add Mrs' Bell's dog into the equation at least once with Paul watching. Still, a great story!