All Comments on 'Mother: Anal'

On par with Silkstockingslover. Well done series.

Needs some editing as there were wrong words used - example, except for accept.

I was reading one before this one and it was so boring I'd just like to say thank you for it getting right into the good stuff

Tom... to the Author and the LADIES of your story. It flowed with sinceitY and a touch of loving

o natural and had that tinge of danger, control

and Taboo

,,Thomas.

The imogi's reveal my emotions. WOW WOW WEE!!!

5🌟's

Great fantasy.

More than hot! I luv a good lesbo anal story. None of the usual hetero, "i went slow so i wouldnt hurt her" stuff, just "fuck my asshole hard."

Re: on post "Anonymousover 4 years ago

Fair

Needs some editing as there were wrong words used - example, except for accept."

Those who pay attention to the story (i.e, the forest) and not individual words (i.e. the trees) could care less about grammar. Its the story and characters in them that count. Lighten up on the editing quips

LOVED IT !!